---Spears Sing of Spring

spears sing of spring
push past rag-tag laggard snow---
trumpet the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 3:39 PM
beautiful....pd
Poet Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 7:55 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in the contest!--kashinath
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
George   Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Simply beautiful, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:16 AM
The second line is quite witty, Deb. Enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Debbie. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:05 AM
many congrats dear friend.
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:59 PM
Enjoyed the rag-tag snow..congrats on your big win. BG
Dillard Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Congratulations to you, Debbie. RAY
Dufresne Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:03 PM
love that second line, congratulations to you Debbie
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:44 PM
iIliked this the first time I read it. Congratualtions on your second place. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:41 PM
How clever are you......including a sneaky little rhyme within the poem, without compromising the true haiku in you!!!! Kuddos to you !!! :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:35 PM
the sun trumpets: CONGRATS for the fine win, lights... fantastic write and great use of language..:) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Congrats Debbie on another top ten winning poem in Carol's contest .. wonderfully expressive lines luv.. enjoy...
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:56 PM
that last line was COOLIO!! Makes me think of those trumpet flowers! congrats, Deb.
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Debbie
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Deb, congratulations on taking first place!
Mehta Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Chris, Debbie
Richards Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Yahoo for you! ...the perfect haiku!! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Congrats Debbie on your first place win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection ... enjoy everso luv..
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Beautiful Haiku.Congrats Debbie on your 1st place win----kashinath
George   Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Gorgeous! Deb. Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE win. Lainie.
Mannan Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 4:32 AM
Many heartiest congrats Debbie for this super win for this awesome haiku. Thanks for your comments. meant a lot.
Horsman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:29 AM
worthy winner, such a gem, congrats. Harry
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