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Speaking the Waves

Waves came in as big as buses, smashing on the seawall and exploding into clouds of watery shrapnel. I felt the sound inside of me, guttural, pushing up and shaping the word "whoosh" in my mouth, ballooning against my lips to open and speak it. "Whoosh" I said on each crash of water, the shock waves becoming my breath to speak its might and power, my voice commandeered by the moment. Whoosh…. Whoosh…. Whoosh I kept chanting until I was emptied and there came the most perfect still.

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Date: 9/6/2023 7:52:00 AM
This is simply gorgeous Paul. Such wonderful imagery. I can almost hear and see the waves. I love the line, in particular,’ into clouds of watery shrapnel’. This reminded me of why I love observing the sea so much. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/7/2023 2:42:00 AM
Pleased to receive such positive comments Christina, thankyou. Fortunately I live near the water, hence the sea is a constant theme. Value the feedback. Wishing you the best...
Date: 9/3/2023 3:18:00 PM
The power of nature. A wonderful connecting poetic observation, Paul. Enjoyable.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/4/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thankyou Christopher for reading and pleased that it spoke. Appreciate your comments, regards Paul

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