Speaking the Waves

Waves came in
as big as buses, smashing
on the seawall and exploding 
into clouds of watery shrapnel.
I felt the sound inside of me,
guttural, pushing up and shaping
the word "whoosh" in my mouth,
ballooning against my lips
to open and speak it.

"Whoosh" I said on each crash
of water, the shock waves
becoming my breath to speak 
its might and power,
my voice commandeered 
by the moment.
Whoosh…. Whoosh….  Whoosh
I kept chanting 
until I was emptied and there came 
the most perfect still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 7:52 AM
This is simply gorgeous Paul. Such wonderful imagery. I can almost hear and see the waves. I love the line, in particular,’ into clouds of watery shrapnel’. This reminded me of why I love observing the sea so much. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
Willason Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Pleased to receive such positive comments Christina, thankyou. Fortunately I live near the water, hence the sea is a constant theme. Value the feedback. Wishing you the best...
Grieves Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:18 PM
The power of nature. A wonderful connecting poetic observation, Paul. Enjoyable.
Willason Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Thankyou Christopher for reading and pleased that it spoke. Appreciate your comments, regards Paul
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