Notes About The Poem

I wrote a shorter version of this originally for a member contest. This was the original version before I realized I had to rewrite it to fit the rules of the contest.

Speaking of Michael Brown

Through the mist ...
vision blurred by the bias of our views
clouding our reason
unable to walk in another men's shoes.
Blinded by the fog ... 
thoughts offered by signs in hand
daring others to cross
convinced we are right, our dissenters lost.

War is declared ...
the air thick with opinion.
Battles commence ... 
destruction of all that is held dear.
Guns blowing smoke
Swords red hot metal forged
Wrapped in the rising haze of heat
Voices raised dirty the streets.

Nowhere  in sight ...  clear rationale
no time to hear; no effort to see.
Air, a toxic mist, release the inner pain that i feel
eyes blinded by tears - no more chances, my friend.

Through the mist ... 
no one hears.
This our reality when ideas supersede our fellow beings.
Through the mist ...
I see no love - hate guised as ideas.

Oh if they could see through the mist...
That is us on both sides of the street.

18~12~2014
Maurice Yvonne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 12:50 AM
On both sides of the streets is us..and We are all so alike..all human before anything else.Your wwords are echoing in my ear..Maurice.
Maverick Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Really hard hitting lines from you Maurice, here you throw out a challenge to us all In great or smaller measure.' thank you for your visits to my pages, and may all be well with you..'
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 10:52 PM
wow, very powerful one!! You always tie up your ideas SO WELL. Those last two lines, so incredible. I take it this will be for Cyndi's contest? Should place very high.
Yvonne Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 11:57 PM
It is too late for that contest.
Meade Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Well said my friend . . . violence cloaked in nice words still spells death!!
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 3:58 PM
We must all learn to look beneath the obvious to see the truth. Well penned.
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