Speaking of Lines

Another deadline missed
I see I survived somehow
  ~ Truly a lifeline

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Date: 7/28/2020 4:40:00 AM
Hilarity in its rare best form of brevity
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2020 2:37:00 PM
Short and sweet, I guess! ~ gw
Date: 7/26/2020 5:37:00 AM
Witty senryu--the way I like 'em, Gershon! Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2020 2:36:00 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Janice! ~ Gershon
Date: 7/25/2020 4:32:00 PM
A lifeline for a deadline - wickedly wonderful word play, gw :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/25/2020 8:48:00 PM
almost astonishingly alliterative too. lol. Thanks, Michelle
Date: 7/25/2020 12:40:00 AM
Hi to keep on missing those deadlines just don’t seem to have the energy to finish them. Good poem, Gershwin. Hugs Eve
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/25/2020 8:54:00 PM
Ha, ha! Your comment gave me an idea: Go out and buy some 'energy drinks.' lol. (I think I'll start with Geritol, if they still sell that old snake oil. lol). Thanks, Eve.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/25/2020 8:47:00 PM
Ha, ha! Your comment gave me an idea: Go out and buy some 'energy drinks.' lol. (I think I'll start with Geritol, if they still sell that old snake oil. lol). Thanks, Eve.
Date: 7/24/2020 4:22:00 PM
good humor, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:08:00 PM
Would you like ice cream on a stick or a dreamsicle? lol. Thanks, Andrea. :) gw
Date: 7/24/2020 9:54:00 AM
Clever with a dash of humour. Sating ink. xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:08:00 PM
First 'sating ink' I ever got in my life. What do I owe ye? :) gw
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