Speak no evil

In the crepuscular halcyon sunset, bells tolled urging
the desultory audience to attend the sermon of the new pastor.
Despite their cynical sentiments, they dared not absent themselves.
The look of visceral satisfaction on the pastor’s face 
was unmistakable.  Outside light became penumbra,
Still, men and women trudged towards the chapel
as the dirge-like bells faded into silence.  His audience was silent too.
He spoke in a sonorous voice, in an opulent resonant poetic vein,
an exuberant style which was to be his familiar characteristic:
Unbridled jealousy is a sin, he intoned, so speak no evil, my friends.



The interpretation of the listeners is FICTION. Still the advice is correct. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/6/2024 10:34:00 AM
Well indeed Victor, and yet we do..Wether unconsciously or knowingly it happens I Ever more view the Bible verse (Trust in the Lord, and lean not on your own understanding) The Word is life itself, and nourishment to the Bones.' A great read for me this evening.'
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Date: 11/2/2024 6:49:00 AM
Hi my friend VICTOR, what a wise poem and powerful words, and its ultimate meaning is no secret, the world is full of jealousy and much evil and crime as a result. A FAVE FOR ME. A CHARISMATIC priest is essential I feel, in order to draw parishioners in. Beautiful write. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:23:00 AM
The church bells toll as the people gather for the sermon. as unbridled jealousy takes the stage
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Date: 10/28/2024 3:33:00 AM
Victor great advice in the end of your religious write. I think Maria said it best in her comment and John also like others had a great insight into this theme of yours. Your poetic perspective and message resonated with all of us. Thank you for sharing my friend and coming by to read what I wrote. Blessings your way Victor...
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Date: 10/27/2024 10:27:00 PM
I enjoyed the atmosphere you created.... dear Victor. A group of parishioners who generally scoff sermons as boring, now listening to the genuine and charismatic voice of a pious preacher. What he said is a truth... ! Jealousy is a vice we should all avoid and speak no evil.
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Date: 10/27/2024 7:02:00 PM
True and much needed advice shared here dear victor, youv written one that got me intrigued to read from the very first line, has as always the storytelling vibe that would get readers engaged from the start to the ending! I absolutely love the flow and also how you’ve woven words here in such a powerful and soulful manner. Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/27/2024 5:28:00 PM
speak no evil indeed I like this
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Date: 10/27/2024 5:17:00 PM
I loved the powerful sermon, Victor. Though the story is fiction, the fact that jealousy abounds, is too true. This is a fave. Best wishes.
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Date: 10/27/2024 2:05:00 PM
Enjoyed! A “captive” audience…they were in for a treat. Hugs
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Date: 10/27/2024 10:52:00 AM
It's nice to hear people who really know how to capture an audience's attention. A unique topic!
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:58:00 AM
Interesting- the end "tolls" so true, enjoyed reading
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Speak no Evil" write. May I add Do No Evil... Great Last Line... Have a blessed day........
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Date: 10/27/2024 7:59:00 AM
ah, fiction, the bane of mislaid truth
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Date: 10/27/2024 6:04:00 AM
Interesting how you set this up, we didn't know what to expect. But the advice is spot on. Jealousy can even lead to murder.
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Date: 10/27/2024 5:58:00 AM
This is a very introspective and thought-provoking piece, dear Victor! The dark atmosphere which you've painted here is just so impactful, creating a solemn canvas where the vulnerability is reflected in intricate shades... I absolutely love how you've written " light became penumbra", "He spoke in a sonorous voice, in an opulent resonant poetic vein" And that ending is beyond soul-hitting! Incredibly crafted! Sending you light and best wishes always ~
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Date: 10/27/2024 4:37:00 AM
Sage advice to a captive audience... captive due to a sense of obligation. Your command of English is to be admired. Some new vocab here I got to acquaint myself with. Blessings
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Date: 10/27/2024 3:26:00 AM
Dear Victor your poem is hauntingly beautiful, capturing a solemn and almost ethereal ambiance. The imagery of the "crepuscular halcyon sunset" and "penumbra" paints a scene suspended between light and darkness, mirroring the congregation's complex emotions...Hugs
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Date: 10/27/2024 3:20:00 AM
Good advice Victor, if you've nothing good to say then keep it shut, many misjudge people and speak out of turn before engaging their brain, Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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