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I look in the mirror and I see a girl that's scared to speak I see fear and disappointment in every word she speaks I see the untold tears That nobody wants to speak Wrong turnings dead ends She weeps When alone she screams Pushing all and everybody that comes close out of reach Frustration and anger her key Hopeless drifting with no ambition they scream . But I see the girl that wants to be happy and free Be loved by all Fill life with all and everything that she could be Make them proud of the women She is to be Fill life with all and everything that she could be Be beautiful be bold proud of who she sees A masterpiece Beautifully made she doesn't know that she's unique Future layed out and planned from god she doesn't see Heavy heart With a perfect frame Painted smile on her face To cover up the scars that still remain In the mirror I see A girl that wants to speak -Adaam Jagne

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Date: 6/23/2016 10:35:00 PM
Adaam, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:26:00 PM
Love the line "Painted smile on her face "
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Date: 6/16/2016 5:44:00 PM
Oh, this is so good Adaam... a perfect fit for this site. Welcome aboard. Skat
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Adaam Jagne
Date: 6/16/2016 6:08:00 PM
Thank you means a lot

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