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There are whispers of neon swirl and spinning. Early morning chirps amid rippling vacillation. Shades of rainbow with pearlescent spattering. Ruby tunes in the midst of songbird perception. Early morning chirps amid rippling vacillation. Melodies emitted by psychedelic wind whistle. Ruby songs in the midst of songbird perception. Glyphs of the cryptical script cut in the crystal. Melodies emitted by psychedelic wind whistle. Eerie outlines hopes and dreams in artwork. Glyphs of the cryptical script cut in the crystal. Glow with sonnets of a rainbow made of spark. Eerie outlines hopes and dreams in artwork. Onto a gloomy sky that was swamped with rain. Glow with sonnets of a rainbow made of spark. Is it eminently feasible to experience all the pain? Onto a gloomy sky that was swamped with rain Shades of rainbow with pearlescent spattering. Is it eminently feasible to experience all the pain? There are whispers of neon swirl and spinning.
Written: May 29, 2022

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Date: 5/29/2022 8:50:00 PM
An excellent Pantoum, Lasaad. I'm always impressed that some of you repeatedly create these Pantoums. Lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 5/29/2022 2:43:00 PM
Voice of exuberance adorns your poem in splendid images, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/29/2022 2:24:00 PM
Stunning imagery in your verse Lasaad, capturing the colourful start to the day. Hope you've had a lovely weekend. Tom
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