Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Sparkling Oceans Apart -

You're a maiden so hot burning thoughts 
whom melts ice inside deep waves salted 
unfolding ocean swells kissing your feet 
For once spoke those hot lips the truth shining 

Sunshine pleasing warm beholding to 
one's eye golden crowned jewel beauty 
rainbow luster coloring pearl treasure 

It's giving off their beauty pure free 
that does not require something in return 

A lady whom pleases the heart warm 
Princess cut with deep class sparkling pure 
utopia's adorable sun rise 

How the body is heated and hear 
her echoing heart beat in the chambers 

Shining a future path dreaming ore 
every single moment precious links 
each one spent with you falling under spell 

Love is like pure sparkling magic gem 
unpredictable true and marvelous 


Magic silk covers batting eyelids 
enchanting soft lovingly flowers 
beautiful petals held within the shell 
Let the rose live forever and the sun 
shines always endless times glistening gold 





Written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen 
a co write in a 9/10 syllable count
Copyright © All Rights Reserved 



 - Thank you my friend Liam !

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Anthony Beesley December 10, 2014 at 7:46 PM Like it...both melodically enchanting and mildly erotic Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2014 at 2:42 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Anthony :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton December 1, 2014 at 3:48 AM a great pen by you both Anne Lise this poem sparkles Liam is a great pal of mine from way before either of us joined soup you will both learn much from each other hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2014 at 4:05 AM - An "old" friend of you Shadow - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak November 24, 2014 at 9:30 AM Great collaboration! The ending is absolutely perfect. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 10:25 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2014 at 11:55 AM this one shines. it is golden!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 1:14 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming November 23, 2014 at 4:35 AM This is a very lovely poem! Full of charm and elegance. :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 4:37 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami November 22, 2014 at 1:32 PM "Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous"...These are soul of the poem...I remember its forever...Best wishes to you... Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 1:46 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Sandip :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 22, 2014 at 12:10 PM a sparkling re-read this early sunday morning, anne.. still lovely!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 1:10 PM - Huggs 2 U !!!!

Bl Devnath November 22, 2014 at 9:16 AM Congrats my lovely lovely friend... just from my side "7". Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 10:57 AM - Thanks for the congrats and 7, dear Bl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 22, 2014 at 9:12 AM Wow! a genius poem depicted sensational ways of true heart and nothing else, i feel here. All the lines are linked philosophically about what lies in lovely heart depicted as "It's giving off their beauty pure free that does not require something in return"........................................... "Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous" along with last lines. I am happy with Poetrysoup along with you the genius. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 10:55 AM - Thank you for a real and lovely comments on our poem my friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 12:14 AM Congratulations my friends...woohoo :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:05 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 21, 2014 at 8:34 PM I enjoyed reading this beautiful collab again...congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:04 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop November 21, 2014 at 7:02 PM What fun you must have had composing this unique poem. Imagery is delightful! Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:04 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Victoria :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 21, 2014 at 6:36 PM Congratulations on poem of the day, beautiful Poem :) blessings eve Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:03 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop November 21, 2014 at 6:19 PM Such a beauty this is sweet lady and good friend Liam. Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:03 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Charmaine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Enriquez November 21, 2014 at 6:07 PM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam: A dazzling collaborative work. Well done. Lovely read. Congratulations on achieving the POTD. All the best then, Leon. Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2014 at 5:02 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Leon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones November 21, 2014 at 3:38 PM Hello Anne Lise...I've been away for some time...what a lovely way to start my evening...you two did an amazing work of art here... Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 3:56 PM - I missed you, Donna! - Nice to see you back :) - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 21, 2014 at 2:15 PM ohhh, applause for the POTD, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 2:31 PM - Thanks for the applause and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming November 21, 2014 at 1:55 PM A very lovely piece of work. :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 2:30 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 21, 2014 at 12:44 PM Congrats Anne-Lise. Love XXXX RAJAT Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 1:42 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rajat :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 21, 2014 at 12:42 PM Anne-Lise and Liam, Best Congratulations on Poem of the Day!! Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 1:41 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Gary :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne November 21, 2014 at 12:30 PM Excellent, congratulations to you both, a great choice for poem of the day. Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 1:41 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Maurice :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2014 at 10:14 AM Fantastic, congratulations to you both! Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 11:30 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian November 21, 2014 at 9:59 AM Congrats, you two! :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 11:29 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eileen :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter November 21, 2014 at 9:41 AM Congratulations to you my dear friend Anne Lise and Liam for been poet of the day. This is a very beautiful romantic poem you two have penned here together. You two more than deserve this honor. Congrats Liam! Enjoy the day! And have a great weekend! A 7 for each of you! And keep the golden pens writing! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D. Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 11:29 AM - Thanks for the congrats and lovely comments, Dorian :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade November 21, 2014 at 9:27 AM You all rock the love!! Congrats!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 11:28 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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