Sparkling Love

As he gazed on her face, she saw waves of emotion, rise and crash in his almond eyes, and she became a river, hurtling down to join, the mighty current. When he whispered to her, honeyed words of passion, in the enormity of silence, she blossomed into a red tulip of love. As he played on the strings, of her heart's violin, she got tuned into an alluring symphony. When he held her palms, she evolved into a beautiful painting, on a blank canvas. When he cupped her face, to stamp on her lips the seal of love, she became a flitting butterfly. When he lifted her up in his arms, all the stars came down, to see the spark in her eyes, wondering if it outdid, their combined lustre!
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Baker Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:32 PM
You expressed the phases of developing love and sensuality that develops between two becoming one. Lovely and a good entry for the contest, Valsa. Well written my friend. Good luck! Bill
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 8:49 PM
LaSaad nailed his comment below: This is so SOOTHING. Your female is truly a butterfly of love, changing with each phase. Enchanting poetry, Valsa! Bravo, Gershon
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:41 AM
Indeed she looks a 'butterfly of love', but not flitting from flower to flower ....! :) Thanks a lot Gershon !
Leffanta Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:46 PM
So now you are ready to write Bollywood? Aloha!
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:39 AM
The image looks like that of a Bollywood movie ! :) Thank you Rico!
Poet Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Your poetry soothes captivated souls. You're good at writing. Valsa, you articulated a wonderful sensation really well; good luck in the contest.
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:37 AM
Glad you find it soothing ! Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Pandit Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 5:55 AM
This sparkling verse of love shines in awesome metaphors, Valsa. Your poem whispers charmingly for the couple in love. Best to you.
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:36 AM
Very grateful to you for this lovely comment, dear Vijay !
Buhagiar Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 1:20 AM
I always consider good poetry where emotions are involved. You write in such a splendid manner. Best for a win.
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:35 AM
That's my concept of poetry too ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Cunningham Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 12:47 AM
That amazing feeling captured well Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Tom
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:34 AM
Love is regenerative and thrilling...Thanks a lot dear Tom !
Horsman Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 9:29 PM
Beautiful entry, Valsa, the transformation when the feeling of love penetrates, is lovely.
George Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:33 AM
Yes, a transformation takes place when hearts thob with love. Thank you harry !
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