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Sparkling Love

As he gazed on her face, she saw waves of emotion, rise and crash in his almond eyes, and she became a river, hurtling down to join, the mighty current. When he whispered to her, honeyed words of passion, in the enormity of silence, she blossomed into a red tulip of love. As he played on the strings, of her heart's violin, she got tuned into an alluring symphony. When he held her palms, she evolved into a beautiful painting, on a blank canvas. When he cupped her face, to stamp on her lips the seal of love, she became a flitting butterfly. When he lifted her up in his arms, all the stars came down, to see the spark in her eyes, wondering if it outdid, their combined lustre!

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Date: 7/21/2022 2:32:00 PM
You expressed the phases of developing love and sensuality that develops between two becoming one. Lovely and a good entry for the contest, Valsa. Well written my friend. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 7/17/2022 8:49:00 PM
LaSaad nailed his comment below: This is so SOOTHING. Your female is truly a butterfly of love, changing with each phase. Enchanting poetry, Valsa! Bravo, Gershon
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Valsa George
Date: 7/18/2022 2:41:00 AM
Indeed she looks a 'butterfly of love', but not flitting from flower to flower ....! :) Thanks a lot Gershon !
Date: 7/17/2022 6:46:00 PM
So now you are ready to write Bollywood? Aloha!
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:39:00 AM
The image looks like that of a Bollywood movie ! :) Thank you Rico!
Date: 7/17/2022 7:17:00 AM
Your poetry soothes captivated souls. You're good at writing. Valsa, you articulated a wonderful sensation really well; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:37:00 AM
Glad you find it soothing ! Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Date: 7/17/2022 5:55:00 AM
This sparkling verse of love shines in awesome metaphors, Valsa. Your poem whispers charmingly for the couple in love. Best to you.
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:36:00 AM
Very grateful to you for this lovely comment, dear Vijay !
Date: 7/17/2022 1:20:00 AM
I always consider good poetry where emotions are involved. You write in such a splendid manner. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:35:00 AM
That's my concept of poetry too ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 7/17/2022 12:47:00 AM
That amazing feeling captured well Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:34:00 AM
Love is regenerative and thrilling...Thanks a lot dear Tom !
Date: 7/16/2022 9:29:00 PM
Beautiful entry, Valsa, the transformation when the feeling of love penetrates, is lovely.
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:33:00 AM
Yes, a transformation takes place when hearts thob with love. Thank you harry !

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