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Sparkling Kisses

Trying my best to concentrate on what is being said For thoughts of him kissing me are swirling in my head An electric current connecting us refuses to be ignored The passion igniting between us demands to be explored His eyes lock on mine and I know he feels the same He leans forward with the intention of my lips to claim Soft lips sweetly entice, leaving me feeling light headed Throaty groans escape as we further become embedded He catches my bottom lip and gives it a gentle suck Flooded with desire my senses suddenly run amok Heart rates accelerating, leaving us breathless and burning The taste for each other now a unquenchable yearning His tongue intertwines with mine, the jolt takes us by surprise This is a rare occurrence, my subconscious blissfully sighs Filled with sweet sensations, sparkling inside and out Totally entranced, his kisses I never want to be without. By Cecilia Macfarlane, August 16, 2012 for PDs Kissing Game Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
I enjoyed your sparkling kisses, Cecilia. You make them sound sweet, exciting and full of desire. #7 hugs // paul
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:44:00 PM
This is a sweet and loving write. You brought the reader into a world of charm and desire. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Stormy Love poem.
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Date: 10/16/2012 10:00:00 PM
I just read this exhilarating piece Cecilia...love it! A great piece for a big win. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/2/2012 6:09:00 AM
congrats on this worthy winner, wow, enjoyed this
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Date: 9/1/2012 1:30:00 PM
lovely write, Cecilia - and congrats on your wins too : )
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Date: 8/29/2012 9:35:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, thaty a lovely expressed poem ,nice rhyme, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 8/29/2012 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Cecilia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:30:00 PM
Joe,said everything that I feel like saying! So "Ditto"..Ha,ha.. I'll just say *FAV* Whew! Some HOT stuff! :o)~
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:03:00 PM
You leave me breathless with this one! That anticipation of the kiss is so tantalizing and then realizing that the kiss itself is everything and more than we anticipated is the "jolt" that "takes us by surprise". Makes me want to go out and kiss someone!!!!!
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Date: 8/26/2012 8:05:00 PM
Is this the one you added the last four lines to?? It seems I saw these lines before??
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Date: 8/26/2012 4:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:47:00 PM
great write Cecilla and congrats,your kiss pulled every breath outta me lol
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Date: 8/26/2012 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 8/24/2012 8:33:00 PM
big congrats. I loved this the first time I saw it.
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Cecilia!!! :)
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Date: 8/24/2012 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Cecilia xx
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:37:00 PM
No wonder this write attained such a high position in the contest! It's a wonderful entry!
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:16:00 PM
lovely and loving kisses. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/23/2012 8:55:00 PM
Cecilia,, let me put on my shades..lol..sparkling sparkling...Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:43:00 PM
So happy for you Cecilia, true and forever love.Beautiful,sweet and romantic poem....I will not say it out loud....but I think you`re in love... <3 - Have a lovely new week. - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :) <3
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:48:00 PM
Wonderful and sexy kisses, Cecilia. Very nicely done for the challenge. You are great giving away your pennies. I don't really know anyone other than myself around my area who would even believe in my penny superstitions to go along with that cool tradition of yours you told me about!!
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Date: 8/17/2012 6:23:00 AM
You go girl. A pleasure to read this morning Cecilia. I wish you the best in P.D.'s contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 1:31:00 AM
woohoo sis, I like it lots, hope it's not fiction and good luck..David
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