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Sparkling green eyes

This nubile soul
so ripe

Her sparkling green eyes
her 
her
I musn't say it
were

bursting with energy
before me
oh yes before me

do I dare

YIKES 

I dove
off of that train with rapid movement
for her 
gallant's dirk
glistened

out of thin air

        




Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 3:57:00 AM
Awesome one!!! I think I would have dove off too! Sometimes we take it too far and we get nothing!! I really like this one's structure. It was quite effective in telling the story.
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Date: 3/29/2015 11:55:00 AM
beautifully painted james loved the style used
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Date: 3/17/2015 3:10:00 PM
Man she must have been attractive..Enjoyed reading your work.Your presence at my page was uplifting...Sara
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Date: 3/17/2015 8:46:00 AM
yikes, don't dive off the train!! I am all set today for ST. Patricks' Day and my green eyes and my little green hat!
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Date: 2/28/2015 11:25:00 PM
Very nice pen James ! I enjoyed reading your unique piece, my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D.
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:46:00 PM
mystery abounds in this read... very intriguingly pleasing, james...write on!.. huggs
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:29:00 AM
James, I love the pauses within your write, the hesitations leave one hovering, well done and thanks so much for your lovely comment on my poem I write pages and pages . . .
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