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Sparkles and Glitter

You never ever Shoulda walked in this bar It's a million miles away From who you think you are Music intoxicates More than the Rum and Coke That pretty girl smiling Causes a lump in your throat Sparkles and glitter Red shoes with high heels Her dress is too short You love what it reveals Yet something ain't right She's not your baby She's sweet bitter temptation Disguised as a lady She walks on over Sits down right next to you Asks you for a drink One leads to quite a few Nothing else seems to matter As she gazes in your eyes You imagine paradise As you reach between her thighs Sparkles and glitter Red shoes with high heels Her dress is too short You love how she feels Yet something ain't right She's not your baby She's sweet bitter temptation Disguised as a lady Laughter and whispers Promises lead to dark places Looking for something In tight hot hidden spaces Yet liars are liars You can read it on their faces You give up on forever Just because your pulse races Sparkles and glitter Lay in a pile on the floor When the sun rises You don't want her any more Guilt you can't escape When you look in the mirror You wish you could convince yourself that the temptress led you here! For Ryan Lucas's Lyric Contest

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/17/2016 12:42:00 PM

Brilliant! Just everything works and I can hear this as a song. You captured how much the raw desire made for a vacuum in emptiness. Rhyme scheme is fun, story excellent, emotion...devestating! I like your PS remark about "the branches" and that one line summarizes the poem. Just perfect Rick!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/13/2016 7:35:00 AM

Very very brilliant write.This is very natural now a days. You have done a very outstanding job here. It is truly impressive. I enjoyed.........with love.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2016 7:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Manmath.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 2:37:00 PM

the temptation is all around us, I very much enjoyed your write Richard:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thanks Linda, hugs Rick.

Theresa Cw

Date: 4/12/2016 12:15:00 AM

WOW!! Richard its been a long time since I've visited your place and what do I find is a prize winning Story. This should be sent to a great top rating magazine or book. You'd be paid and sent top billing. Very well done. a 7 x a million and a thousand FAV'S. Thanks for the read Richard. hugs from Theresa

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:08:00 AM

Welcome back to Casa Lama. Thanks for the generous comment.

Mama Bear

Date: 4/11/2016 8:02:00 PM

What a tale from someone who does not know the word cheating or one night stands Well done Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:08:00 AM

Thanks and love back to you.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/11/2016 6:22:00 PM

I don't do one night stands for this very reason. Great story as always, Richard. You certainly have a gift for story telling. Peace my friend:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:16:00 AM

You are kind Daniel.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2016 4:15:00 PM

Temptation...a one-night stand, followed by guilt and remorse. No good blaming it on others...not going to change anything! Great story in poetic words, Richard! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Paul.;0)

Constance La France

Date: 4/11/2016 3:10:00 PM

Richard, oh so deep and dark, many a man and even woman has taken that path of one night of desire to wake in the morning to a nightmare they want to run from, wonderful 7 ~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Constance, I think that would be a lonely sad life.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2016 2:04:00 PM

A powerful poem Richard...What seems yummy delicious momentary can at times lead to indigestion that make us wanna throw up our remorse...and make us wanna wish We were much stronger.Excellent!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:19:00 AM

Well said Charmaine Thanks for visiting.

John Hamilton

Date: 4/11/2016 1:28:00 PM

Like the way you tell the story, could be a country song you know like your cheaten heart...nicely done.. you never disappoint!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:21:00 AM

I did imagine this one as a country song. Thanks for the visit John.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/11/2016 12:37:00 PM

You tell stories powerfully, like a moth to a flame I am drawn to every word you write. Brilliant emotional reveals and human nature. hugs xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:22:00 AM

A big hug back to you! I'm pleased by your response.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2016 11:31:00 AM

this is a GREAT morality tale for cheaters. It reminds me of that great new pop song (of course right now I can't even recall it) I really enjoyed seeing this one today.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:22:00 AM

Now you have me curious. Thanks for the visit.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2016 11:28:00 AM

Excellent story Richard. I admit after my divorce I went down this path once. I was full of regret, remorse, guilt and just felt horrible for weeks. I cant imagine how people do it. I need the love.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2016 7:24:00 AM

I too need the love. So many throw it away for nothing of substance.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2016 10:07:00 AM

Wow....this is such a write, Richard. The momentary gratification of lust often leads to unwanted results. Great write... skirt is TOO short. ;) Extra O....as in OOOOOOOO. ;) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2016 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, I'll change it. Hugs Rick.