Spare Me Three Last Words

She wanders through the rubble,
Tears streaming down her twisted face.
Red eyes mixed with black eyeliner. 
Her pupils shine green among the dancing flames.

Branches snag her tattered clothes,
Causing her to fall.
On hands and knees,
She has no will to stand.

Chains and locks on her wrists and ankles,
Not letting her move.
Too weak…
She’s losing the fight.

Days of crying and sobbing,
Such pain.
Screaming on the inside,
But her voice won’t work…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Marie Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Wow... It's so....i don't even have the words to describe it Wonderful poem :]
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September 29, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Anissa, just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
Augustus Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:08 PM
This is really heavy but brilliant. You are really getting the essence of the woman's pain. Congratulations! This definitely deserved to get featured!
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Anissa. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 2:35 PM
So sad that far too many end up in this place. This poem lets the reader experience the pain. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Anissa, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
George   Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week, dear Anissa. Love and Light, Lainie.
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Anissa. Love, Carol
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