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Space-Time:

Time born from ether

Before the mind was conscious

From infinite space.

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Phil Capitano

April 10, 2017 at 10:53 AM

Very cool; cosmic food for thought.

White Wolf

April 10, 2017 at 7:12 PM

Thank you very much, Phil /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.

March 20, 2017 at 9:25 AM

Cool write, WW. Cool contemplations. Good for meditations. A 7 for sure. Love always, bro.

White Wolf

April 10, 2017 at 7:11 PM

Thank you, RW /|\

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2017 at 10:27 PM

very cool, White Wolf! When I try to fathom infinity it makes me a bit crazy!

White Wolf

March 18, 2017 at 11:55 PM

Haha, I know what you mean, Andrea! /|\

Vladislav Raven

March 16, 2017 at 7:22 PM

Hi White Wolf, once again i drop by a Haiku. To me there is nothing like a well thought out, written Haiku and this is just what your Haiku is my friend. You easily capture your concept within this Haiku. An excellent piece. For me this is definitely a seven and a fave. Your friend....Mike.

White Wolf

March 16, 2017 at 8:32 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Mike! I tend to steer clear of this form, I find it quite restrictive. /|\

Eve Roper

March 15, 2017 at 5:06 PM

fasinating photo, great imiagary in in a few lines , well done ..~*

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:59 PM

Thank you, Eve /|\

Lisa Ricci

March 15, 2017 at 3:27 PM

Hello White Wolf. This little entry is intriguing and allows the reader to pause for a second. This was quite the expression. Well done

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:59 PM

Thank you very much, Lisa /|\

Carol B.

March 15, 2017 at 9:22 AM

My mind tells me this is a great Haiku, :)

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:57 PM

Thank you, Carol /|\

Heidi Sands

March 15, 2017 at 7:41 AM

A well done Haiku that makes the reader think. :)

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:55 PM

Thank you, Heidi /|\

Kim Rodrigues

March 15, 2017 at 7:12 AM

That first line drew me in! Very nice!

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:55 PM

Thank you very much, Kim /|\

Darren White

March 15, 2017 at 6:34 AM

Deep, great haiku, different but good :)

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:54 PM

Thank you, Duir /|\

Connie Marcum Wong

March 15, 2017 at 5:15 AM

Starburst, stardust expanding, changing, metamorphosis over eons incalculable! I love it! 7 ; )

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Thank you, Connie /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2017 at 5:14 AM

- Wonderful - Well done, White Wolf - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 5:49 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:36 AM

Brilliantly philosophical dear WW! A seven!

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 3:40 AM

Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\

Doug Vinson

March 15, 2017 at 1:56 AM

Hey Budgie. : ) I once thought that all we truly have is time. Space has changed, since then, and most would say that time has passed.

Doug Vinson

March 15, 2017 at 3:59 AM

The Moon knows our secrets.

White Wolf

March 15, 2017 at 2:01 AM

But neither can exist without the other! The space may change where you are in, as long as you don't change who you are in that space! But then again, space like time changes us too!

Space-Time:

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