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Spaceship

Once upon a time...
A little boy and a little girl
Looked up at the stars from the planet below
Seeing the moon hang bright in the sky
Said one to the other, I wonder... I wonder, if there we could go.

Said the stars in the sky to the two on the ground,
If you reach up high and fly into the night
You will never come down 
Try as you might

So the boy and the girl came up with a scheme
(not to be like Heroes stun guns blazing,
Or find aliens no matter how amazing)
But to build a sleek spaceship to follow their dream.

They rolled up their sleeves,and got right to work
Putting gizmos to gadgets,
whosits to whatsits
A mighty spaceship did start to take form.

At last came the day when the two,
Declared that all was right.
they could finally, 3...2...1 ... 
Blast off into the night.

Together in a spaceship built on dreams 
As they went along their travels
All of the marvels
In a lonely universe they did see.

Past the supernovas
And into Antares nebula 
Swinging from Orion's belt
And drinking from the dipper.

Seeing baby stars be born
In the Oort cloud
Eating cookies with the Milky way 
Jumping around the galaxies.

Just the boy and the girl all alone
Among the shining stars
Floating in a spaceship
Heading back towards home.

A little boy and a little girl
Look down from the stars to the planet below
Past the moon hanging bright in the sky.
Said one to the other, I wonder... I wonder, if there we could go.
                                                                                           ... The end.

03/02/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 12:28 PM
What a delightful and playful joy to read. Well done, Heather.
Watt Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Heather, such a fun ride around the galaxy! I hope you are able to make this into a children's book (if you haven't already!) Very imaginative and compelling. I'll confess my friends went to outer space and back in a cardboard box powered by a floor fan, but they left me behind because I didn't believe it could fly! The tales they told of seeing the dark side of the moon! Love it ~ John
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May 9, 2015 at 8:43 PM
A super congrats Heather, haven't seen you on the soup. Linda
Secrest Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Thank you for the comment!! Yeah, it's been finals season, so all my classes have been hammering me with work. I haven't had much time, but since summer is here I should be on more often.
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Heather, congratulations in the Knight Writer's Club contest. SKAT :)
Secrest Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Thank You!
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:05 PM
that was so cool how you had them looking back down to our planet in the end. A GREAT story well told.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 6:40 AM
I am a space fan and can easily identify with this poem - always have recurring dreams of intergalactic travel. Thank you for sharing this wonderful voyage!
Toil Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 10:25 AM
A beautiful fairytale woven of creative imagination and word-craft. I greatly enjoyed it. Peace...Sam
A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 10:16 PM
HEATHER, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, heather
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 3:19 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS YOUR CREATIVE WIN POEM: "SPACESHIP" HEATHER!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 3:18 PM
congrats on placing Heather lovely poem hugs
Bedave Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 2:12 AM
sound cool i wanna go to space lol
Ryerson Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 6:43 PM
GREAT imagination. I see a children's book here...
Eastman Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Bravo! Loved it!
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 9:53 AM
The ending made me think of my mom. She would always say when we would get inside the city limits after a trip. It's always nice to get back home. A wonderful trip around the cosmos Heather. Welcome Back. :)
Berdoo Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Like Richard said below, great childrens story. Child like poem that flows of yester years fantasies.
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:19 PM
A great dreamy poem for a quiet Saturday morning. Thank you very much.
De Paz Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:14 AM
This is like the little prince story, where fantasy and reality are mixed. Love is the engine for spaceships like this!
Sergi Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Hi Heather: I am a great admirer of story poems and I really enjpyed this one. My compliments!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 9:45 AM
What a sweet story! This could be a children's book.
Secrest Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Thanks for your kind comment!!! I admit I wrote it in a children's book style.
Moribund Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Love this poem!!! I am a fan of Sci-Fi and TV shows like Star Trek and The Big Bang Theory, so this was really something that I could connect with. Have a great day!!!
Malcolm Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Your poems seem to flow so naturally. I have enjoyed each one I've read so far.
Fisher Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 8:51 PM
This is a wonderful story, with so many great lines; some rhyming some not. I love an adventure, and you took us on one!
Bordner Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 6:41 PM
"Back to the basics..." as is said Heather. Great write about companionship and all the exoration that goes along with it. J.A.B.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Heather, this is a very put together write and I have to say that it made me smile to myself and I really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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