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The lineman waves his flag I take the ten-minute break

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Michael Torres

Date: 12/3/2008 12:13:00 PM

clever and funny. Brian their good at that break taking but you know I wouldnt want their Job outside in the sun standing around etc. Nice write my friend blessing's to you and your's Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/3/2008 12:11:00 PM

Darn, all I did was go to the athroom, and I missed it! heehee, this was great Brian, love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/3/2008 11:33:00 AM

Well, if you're watching this on TV I am filling that space with a trip to the fridge! Have no idea what sport, if you're playing or watching but I love all the possibilities of that 10 minute break. Brian, your thoughtful comments make my day. Thank you so much! BTW - when is the big day this month? Do tell. Love, Shar