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Spacekraft (Werk Makes Free)

Robotic space arm. Slowly building spaceship. Metallic glimmer of iron and steel. Advanced quadrilaterals and spheres. Trigonometrical equations- Cascade from computer screens. Hammers bang. Sawblades sing. Conceived by human minds. Achieved thanks to alien technology. Many centuries it takes to complete. But what a sight to finally behold. The sun reflects off smooth silver. Dazzling eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/8/2010 1:03:00 PM
Great writing, and congrats on the high placement in the contest!! YOu really know your spaceships! Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 3:55:00 PM
Brillant writing here, Daniel ... just love the Werk Makes Free ... LOL ... congratulations on your win in Matt's contest !!
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:00:00 AM
Great work, Daniel! Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel on this imaginative winning poem for the contest!-Robert
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:39:00 AM
Congrats Daniel on your 3rd place win in Matt's spaceship contest.. wonderful write and well deserved win.. luv..Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/21/2010 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel, on your success Matt Calari’s “How to Build a Spaceship” contest with this imaginative poem. Your creative skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 6:26:00 PM
Great entry for Matt's contest Daniel..still working on mine.. good luck in the contest... enjoyed all the technology terminology from u... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/22/2009 6:19:00 PM
good one, good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 12/22/2009 12:28:00 PM
Interesting space feat. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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