Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

Space - the Final Frontier

SPACE BLOG

”Captains Log”
 ""20/12.1""
”Closing Cruise”

Space… the final… frontier 

Milky Way 
Classified 
Spiral look
~Violent place*** found in the space*** center of the UNIVERSE

Elliptical 
Galaxies, 
Egg shape ship
~Billions of *** light years from*** face of Earth

Millions to,
Trillions stars,
Can’t touch the fantasy of this
~Old red stars *** very low *** gas and dust

Collisions 
Have destroyed 
The structure, when in flight
~We see in*** our own epic*** galaxy.


The Voyage has begun- come join me
And, journey to all undiscovered countries-
Boldly going where no man or no one has gone before-
High on my spaceship:)

PD

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David Scott February 1, 2021 at 5:25 PM Red stars and blue yes formed from pockets of gas some five points of light the whole solour system magiical beauitful write xxxxx

Arty Rico Jones November 4, 2013 at 11:15 AM Very nice! You must be into space. Darn! Missed the solar eclipse yesterday

Robin Davis October 26, 2013 at 10:02 PM Linda This is a creative and unique write. It pulls the reader into a world of unknown sceneries through the magic of space. Nice job my friend Hugs Thank you so much for 2nd place in your contest with my Soldier poem. I appreciate it very much

David Scott September 3, 2013 at 10:34 AM love the mention of stars and distant planits this I tryed to capturer in stars and space poems an endless odyssey xxx davidscott

Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 4:55 PM this is as good as it gets from the original script of that telly. i like their universe more than star wars thou its like comparing coffee to tea! especially the new star trek movie, they are doing a very excellent job. . this might be the winner but let me make you run for your money. . i am bring ing my Klingon cloaking ship to you. . . .

Debbie Duncan June 13, 2013 at 1:57 PM I loved watching Star Trek, Captain was "good looking" ;} Can you believe William Shatner is 80 yrs old ;} have a great day Linda xo's ;}

Mari Banks June 4, 2013 at 8:26 AM As an old Trekkie, I had to appreciate this. A fun and engaging write! m

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. May 5, 2013 at 5:11 PM I'd love to take that journey my friend. What an entertaining write here.

Suzanne Delaney May 4, 2013 at 11:45 AM PD: This gave the feeling of the vastness of the Universe...perfect form to achieve the tone. Love you always, SuZ

David Scott April 18, 2013 at 12:04 PM very insighful i dont know much about the subject xxdavidscott

Chipepo Lwele April 17, 2013 at 4:00 AM lovely.i enjoed to stop by!

Bl Devnath April 11, 2013 at 10:02 AM Excellent haiku of the center of the Universe where no one has gone before. Perhaps will not, I think. Loved your nice thought. Loved always, bl

Robert Pettit March 31, 2013 at 1:17 PM Live long and prosper. Good write.

Michael Dom March 21, 2013 at 7:33 AM hey PD, I never thought about it that way, but yes, Captain Kirk was the original blogger! I wonder what Spock's Tweets would have been like? Cheers!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet March 11, 2013 at 12:52 AM You know your poetry was never the same. It is unique,it has its own dominating and undefined place. You are a rarity that I admire to have more and more of every-time. When I approach your work I already know what to expect you never fail the audience. You never fail to bring the best of your self to the table. Not just for you but for us and for that I am eternally grateful!!!!!

Ashley Last March 10, 2013 at 6:28 PM I know a fellow Star Trek lover when I read their poetry! I thought it was really astonishing. I loved it!

Cecil Hickman March 9, 2013 at 8:21 PM very very nicely done PD,,this is and always will be a favorite of mine, especially since I have seen any and all star trek, star wars and many other space movies or series,,,very well written and Thank You for all your visits and all your words that you have left behind,,always a pleasure to see your work and your words,,,Blessings..Cecil

David Williams March 7, 2013 at 1:25 PM Tex, just a quick Hi before i sign off, I see this won, belated congrats to you...David

Richard Ferry March 6, 2013 at 2:30 PM Hello Linda My favorite show of all time.. Nice write...A billion light years away...Thats me..Please put glory towards my annual subscription for me..No way for me to do this where I am..Thank you rick

Jack Horne March 6, 2013 at 9:20 AM love these clever haiku, PD. Hope you are having a great week xx

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2013 at 7:43 AM Reads like a winner..Do you desire to go to Mars? ..Someone is getting up a trip..Only two can go for 501 days journey..Do you dare?...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence was uplifting..Sara

Jeremy Martin March 5, 2013 at 10:02 PM Celestial sensation. I love it! -Jeremy

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2013 at 9:46 PM PD, I went off and had to come back. Just wanted to tell you I got your last little note!! goodnight now. and congrats to you in the contest too.

Yanny Widjanarko March 5, 2013 at 6:07 PM Marvelous work! :D congrats on your win, Linda :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, Yanny

Lucilla Carrillo March 5, 2013 at 12:52 PM Linda; I loved this. Perfect title for a perfect poem. Thanks. I hope you are doing good. Lucy

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