Space Queen



Abu-deeni,
Zekarian space queen
Ruler of the sacred realm, 
where resides the seven suns
that encircles the vast
Irthendai nebula islands
She, of regal royalty,
holds the scepter of cosmic fire
The energy of a thousand volcano clouds
crackles at the raising of her fearsome rod:
A theta wave imprinted weapon,
which only she can wield and power down
Abu-deeni,
a righteous warrior queen
Wears a transmuting armor
that can change into any density
Her Cergigon mag-nav boots 
makes her supreme master of gravity
She commands the Nth dimension knights,
	     they of unwavering loyalty 
So many life-and-death decisions
by this queen are never taken lightly
Abu-deeni,
daughter of Xandar and Bei-hou 
Royal seed from the fourth root
Chosen to lead, for she was the first to speak
prophecy at the passing rite of her youth
It was said by the keepers of the Mist Veil,
that a mighty she-Kartaga bird would be born
And her life flight would burn brighter than the seven suns
That she would meet a soulmate
from a distant place of unknown origin ... 
A supreme adaptive being from a species called Ooman
Abu-deeni,
Zekarian warrior queen
Helped her Ooman future husband 
destroy his enemies’ flying metal machines
Then with their combined strength, put an end 
to the Hordes of the Void cosmic idol worshiping
Abu-deeni and Abel-adem
had a baby half-Ooman, half-Zekarian
It was a resplendent Golden Era of Xeno Tolerance;
that ushered in the eve of Edenic love,
		        and eons of universal enlightenment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/19/2017 11:51:00 AM
This epic story sounds like something out of Revelations. It is too much for me to even grasp. You certainly have a creative sci-fi imagination that could take your far. Creative write.
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:46:00 PM
Wow! Freddie, I'm not really into Sci-fi but I'm into you and this romantic tale. You are a good writer. I see this as a book/ movie. Where Abu-deeni and Abel-adem will live happily ever after ( of course a movie/ book will have more drama). Excellent writing my friend, you had me from start to finish:-) Alexis
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