Space Filled Desires

crying desires
as i began writing 
one name
on misted windows
mirror of this soul
in a breathing heart
softly blows
gently upon
the breeze
emotions fingertips
draws deeply within

looking out
from darkness
into the night sky
a star flickers
in candle feelings
embers held 
within emotions arms
whispering  breeze 
softly speaks
to your heart

i all but say
those words
kissing you love
under the moon
begins touching deeply 
shadows of two
silver words holding
princess its you
a dream

fairytale embraced  emotion
holding out feelings
in glass slippers
breaking news
midnight happiness
bells begin ringing
sweetly rejoicing
happy ever after

holding your hands
feelings explode 
sparkling magic dust
falling jeweled emotions
stars wink 
as the moon smiles
oh Cinderella
most beautiful 
you dazzle
the dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Virden Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Liam, your Cinderella brings out your gift like those "feelings in candles" a most precious write my friend
Chircop Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 6:32 PM
You are the one dazzling the dream Liam.Your verses are like a dream within a dream .I am happy to read them.Magical and most romantic.
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Liam....you speak my language. Such a pure and enchanting write.......so.....beautifully rich with emotions. Lovely
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