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Space Between Stars

watching through the lenses rubies of midnight sky connected like red threads stained with night's dye thousands of miles apart thousands of lives in between the blind connection remains like messages left unseen minimal yet eternal void bridged with untold memories the love and the hatred the reliefs and the worries stories to remember through years of how the stars waited eagerly praying the space in-between to decline so they could collide eternally...

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Date: 10/26/2024 9:15:00 AM
Dear Cloud Fever, you capture the space between stars with poetic finesse, potent emotion and creative imagery. I especially adore "stained with night's dye" and "praying the space in-between to decline/so they could collide eternally..." for a beautiful finale to and exceptional piece. Warmest wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I believe I am very new to this arena, and can still do better. I am glad to be surrounded by so many amazing people. Love and warm wishes~~ <3

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