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Space and Time

Entering the doorway through my heart Following the nuance of space Allowing expansion ~ mystery ~ and curiosity To guide me into realms of spiritual awakening Journeying through moments in time Filled with opportunities To appreciate and cherish To express gratitude To be connected to the forces Of nature and humanity Together we take flight Guided by white hawks Silently lifting off Into darkened skies Kissed by gray hues Alighting on silken clouds Transporting us higher A deep inhale as gentle breezes Tickle my earlobes and caress my soul My heart is open ~ expanding ~ gaining insight Exposed My tears flow freely I allow the pain and suffering to become me As I focus on illumination and helping others With embracing arms and heart alive Calling out to our elders and animal spirits To join in our collective dance The soft wind carries us We float and fly and glide Entering the realm of light Sunbeams vibrating at the edges of perception A fuzzy twinkling as our eyes excite Riding magic cloud carpets Above ocean’s breast Gazing down The beauty becomes us Gold light rays skate on undulating waves Illuminating tide’s glimmering foam A waltz of light and sound Briny majesty Luminous shafts dance and sway In a lovers embrace Across veridian waves Passionately singing out Becoming one Our voices ~ melodies Songs of our ancestors Ballads from distant shores Past and present Reveal themselves in Tender haunting notes Arriving on mist’s fingertips Hoovering close to Mother Ocean’s surface We hear her heartbeat Lap lap lap ... bubbles ... breath Surface foam breaking She appears in nature’s coat of shiny black A regal humpback A tranquil Goddess welcoming us We ride upon this graceful giant As she whispers her secrets Feeling her slow movement Through watery depths Turning gently ~ moving up and down We welcome her strength as Turquoise tides caress us Guided by celestial navigation .... we ride Gazing up at the sparkling stars We listen to the collective heartbeat of eternity One breath One exhale Together

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/23/2023 1:02:00 PM

Back again to read this and know it will likely give me true inspiration for some verses tonight. As both yours and Ladylabyrinth's poetry always gives me. God bless.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/1/2023 4:27:00 PM

Blessings to you dear Robert . Such a gift that you have revisited this poem of mine for inspiration. In gratitude, Susan :)

Clifford Villalon

Date: 1/26/2023 4:14:00 AM

Hello Miss Susan! :) Cliff

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/27/2023 2:13:00 PM

Hi Cliff, Happy for your visit ! Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/29/2022 8:37:00 PM

That's a beautiful write. (on my favourite topics lol) loved it girl. May 2023 be filled with joy and love. Blessings

Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/31/2022 12:00:00 PM

Hi Paghunda , Thank you for the kind sentiments and your wishes. I appreciate your visit ! Hugs, Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/22/2022 11:58:00 AM

I'm revisiting your poems, Susan; I can confirm that I've read them all, but it does not matter, as I'm enjoying going through them once more. Warm regards & hugs my friend // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/31/2022 11:05:00 AM

Dearest Paul, I love your visits and presence and participation. Thank you for your kind comments and revisiting of my poem. Big hugs and a healthy happy 2023 to you and yours ! Love, Susan :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/23/2022 7:03:00 AM

I'm carried away by this ethereal write Susan. Linda

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2022 12:42:00 PM

Dear Linda, I am thrilled you were carried away and that we could journey together ! Thank you for your visit. Susan :)

Weston Gregory

Date: 8/19/2022 5:44:00 PM

The beauty immerses the depth, the height and encompasses our whole. Each moment engages our being and excite the emotion, only temporarily sated by our interaction with the creature of light. This is an awesome write.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2022 12:14:00 PM

Dear Weston , in gratitude for your visit and eloquent deep comments . Thank you for joining me on this journey . I am so happy to have you visit and experience your presence . Susan :)

Robertina B.

Date: 8/18/2022 11:13:00 AM

I absolutely enjoyed this gem, Susan.. It transported me on quite a spiritual journey! The imagery is exceptional and exquisite! A belated Congratulations on your POTD.. This is going right into my faves! Many blessings to you, dear Susan..

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/19/2022 1:03:00 PM

Dear Robertina, What a gift to have you visit and share your heart in these humbling comments. Thank you for taking this journey with me into Space and Time. I am in gratitude for your fav. Blessings to you and all good thoughts, Susan :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/17/2022 10:19:00 AM

A beautiful soul whose well of Love is so deep and chambers of heart so vast is gifted the grace of insight and the power of flight into space and time to acquire a deeper understanding of the Self and the capability to bond with mighty Nature and human nature.. Embarking on the path of your unique and touching every single word have wonderfully marked my very soul.. Thank you so much dear friend and poetess Susan for allowing such a Light and delight! Congratulations on your POTD honour! A well deserved recognition! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/19/2022 1:01:00 PM

oh Besma, Your words fill me me joy and humbleness and gratitude for you. You are a beacon of light and depth and heart. I am so very thrilled we can journey together in words and spirit. What a gift indeed. I am so very happy to see you back here shining your light on us all. Hugs and love and blessings, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/16/2022 12:23:00 PM

WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write. I love the ending. "One breath One exhale Together." So Beautiful. Have a great/blessed day................

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/19/2022 12:59:00 PM

Hi dear Paula, It is such a gift to have you visit and comment.I am glad you enjoyed this poem. All best wishes on your day, week and month as you say writing away !! Susa :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/9/2022 12:28:00 AM

Dearest Susan, just came here to see if you had written any new poem... I hope you are doing good my friend... Have a blessed lovely day... ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/19/2022 12:57:00 PM

Hi dear Ani, I have been so very busy getting our skincare company together. We are getting close to launching! I am missing writing, however I will soon ! Sending love and hugs and all blessings, Susan :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/6/2022 11:56:00 AM

Quite stunning "Briny majesty" to mine faves!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/7/2022 2:07:00 PM

James, I am thrilled you could take this journey with me and honored by your fav! Thank you. Blessings, Susan :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/6/2022 8:37:00 AM

Dearest Susan my inspiring friend, upon the wings of white hawks your exquisite expression takes flight across the wanting page. I revel in this meditative journey embracing Nature, the past and animal spirits in a collective dance and I relish the embrace of your very nature; the joy, insight, passion, and tears acknowledged and absorbed, as illumination shines a light on helping others. Your poem is a celebration of love, wisdom, family, tranquility, spirituality, femininity.. To be immersed in a turquoise tide is splendid indeed, to listen to the collective heartbeats of eternity is profound. Your poem transforms me and transports me. You are transcendent and radiant, my sweet sister. Congratulation for POTD honors. A rich, lush, uplifting and beautiful choice. Warmest wishes, love and hugs sent on white wings.. ~Susan

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/7/2022 2:05:00 PM

My dearest Susan ..my poetry sister and friend. You grace me with your presence which is such a welcome gift. Your words of praise and acknowledgement humble me. You have lived many lifetimes and have the ability to see and feel and innately understand my words and journey with me on white wings. I am forever grateful for your depth of consciousness, multi layered spiritual mind and heart full of love and wisdom. Until our next flight, Love and hugs Susan

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/4/2022 9:50:00 AM

So many captivating imagery woven with brilliance. More power to your creative sojourn, Susan. ^_^ JCB

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/4/2022 2:18:00 PM

JCB, thank you for your visit and participation and comments. Sending all good wishes to you ! Susan :)

Ann Foster

Date: 8/1/2022 12:14:00 PM

Wow... such imagery... beautiful... Ann

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/2/2022 8:58:00 AM

Thank you dear Ann for your visit and comments. In gratitude, Susan :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/1/2022 8:41:00 AM

So beautiful... a great poem.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/3/2022 12:10:00 AM

Always...

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/2/2022 8:58:00 AM

Pashang , Thank you very much for your visit and lovely comments. Blessings, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2022 12:39:00 PM

I hope to see some new ones to read of yours, Susan!! Thanks for your sweet comments on my poems, and I hope you are enjoying much success in your new business!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/2/2022 8:57:00 AM

Andrea , Thank you my friend . I am in CA working away ! Looking forward to seeing and reading more of your poetry. Big hugs . Susan :)

Michael Tor

Date: 7/24/2022 11:59:00 PM

There is hope Susan in Nature and man coexisting on this planet your Free verse expression traveling in this marvelous mystic mindset you have empowered us to ride with you. Congratulations also on your POTD. I think that sums up the quality and appreciation of your Poetry. God bless you and sorry for the late response...

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/2/2022 8:56:00 AM

Dear Michael , thank you for your visit . I am so happy to hear from you anytime! I am grateful for your participation and beautiful energy . Thank you and blessings sent right back to you . Hugs, Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/24/2022 3:46:00 AM

I love your last verse Susan my friend and congratulations for your poem being chosen as POTD a great honor and privilege. Your poem breathtaking. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/24/2022 12:59:00 PM

Dearest Jennifer , So happy to see you here writing again ! I hope you are feeling better . Thank you for your participation and comments. Big hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Timothy Ray

Date: 7/23/2022 2:07:00 PM

quite the ride there Susan, such lovely treatments along the way via visual trappings belonging in some elfish castle...the beauty in a poets wings gathering in lyncean comings and goings, where nothing escapes....great poem, such a lovely flight

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/24/2022 12:58:00 PM

Thank you dear Timothy for taking this flight with me. It’s always lovely to have you along !! In gratitude for your presence. Susan :)

Ann Peck

Date: 7/22/2022 8:39:00 AM

So gorgeous, Susan. I felt I flew alongside you and rode on the back of the marvelous humpback, your descriptions so clear and enticing. Congrats on POTD! :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/23/2022 11:24:00 AM

Dear Ann , Thank you for you congratulations and the lovely comments. I am so glad we could ride together ! Hugs, Susan :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/21/2022 5:29:00 AM

So like a soothing breeze is this wonderful new creation my friend. Congratulations on being awarded POTD! Perfect closing-- "" Guided by celestial navigation .... we ride Gazing up at the sparkling stars We listen to the collective heartbeat of eternity One breath One exhale Together "" A true gem , a joy to read- a fav...

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/21/2022 7:34:00 AM

Dearest Robert, such an honor your visit and your participation. Thank you for your lovely comments and your fav! I appreciate you ! Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful poems soon ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2022 1:41:00 PM

I can see from our talk we had how you get inspired now. This is a great depiction of things you told me. So beautiful, Susan. Oh, and congrats on the POTD!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/19/2022 6:38:00 PM

Hello my friend Andrea ! Thank you so much. In gratitude. I am so happy we could share time together. I am always inspired by you ! See you soon. Hugs, Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2022 10:04:00 AM

It has been so uplifting to travel with you and listen to the 'heartbeat of eternity', Susan. When I read your poetry I convince myself that yes, it is possible for nature and humans to live together happily ever after! I must also applaud the striking technical aspect of your writing. ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/19/2022 12:11:00 PM

Dearest Paul, So honored by your visit and participation as always ! I am so happy this poem made you feel the possibilities you describe. I am so happy to have found you here and cherish our connection. In gratitude with big hugs, Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/19/2022 4:34:00 AM

Huge congratulations, Dear Susan, for your POTD honour - you are a talented poet, and you are a gifted artist - both mastery blended in this mystic piece of writing. Kudos to you, Susan. "One breath/ One exhale/ Together " - the whole poem is superbly written, but this climactic stanza gives me a chill! Brilliant creation! Love and hugs to the creative artist ~ Mala

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/19/2022 8:36:00 AM

Dear Mala, I am so happy that I could give you a chill ! Your presence and participation is such a gift to me. Thank you my friend. I have been loving your poems and you are always an inspiration. Big hugs and all blessings, susan :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/19/2022 2:10:00 AM

Wow, some journey is this, Susan, your mystic mindset illuminates the whole poem, So deserved POTD. Harry

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/19/2022 8:33:00 AM

Harry, I am so happy for your visit and comments. I very much enjoy reading your creations. Thank you thank you ! Hugs, Susan :)