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Space, now theres a giant divide Space, in terms of close proximity Space, still a massive hole inside Space, at on time felt like plenty Space, that is quite often limitless Space, that is three dimensional Space, not very often spacious Space, looking for another interval Space, like a trip to mars Space, astronaut’s journey Space, the moon ,sun the stars Space, studied in astromany Space the kind that is treasured Space, that you don't want to share Space, can also be measured Space, in a mathmatical sense ,Cubic Square Again the same pattern as stars and time poems with this again giving meaning but this I was trying to give a part two to time poem as I’ve mentioned in worlds apart poem time and space Inspired- by LINDA PD - one of your poems that was on this subject i read some time ago/ and thank you to other soup poets for your inspiration,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, note don’t know if last four lines make any sense trying to do what i did with oth writes in this pattern keep to four verse but also subject THIS IS LIKE A FOLLOW UP TO STARS AND TIME

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Date: 11/22/2013 4:42:00 PM
Hi David, nice seeing you online when I'm around... Following up on your inspiring poem. hahah about that space you don't like to share... Love the measurements and all in this poem... I posted a new poem,,, stop by when you have the chance... Hugs...LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2013 2:11:00 PM
These verses are awesome. :D "Space- sometimes empty"....I know how that feels. Hehe Always, Laura
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