Space
Space, now theres a giant divide
Space, in terms of close proximity
Space, still a massive hole inside
Space, at on time felt like plenty
Space, that is quite often limitless
Space, that is three dimensional
Space, not very often spacious
Space, looking for another interval
Space, like a trip to mars
Space, astronaut’s journey
Space, the moon ,sun the stars
Space, studied in astromany
Space the kind that is treasured
Space, that you don't want to share
Space, can also be measured
Space, in a mathmatical sense ,Cubic Square
Again the same pattern as stars and time poems with this again giving meaning but
this I was trying to give a part two to time poem as I’ve mentioned in worlds apart poem time and space
Inspired- by LINDA PD - one of your poems that was on this subject i read some time ago/ and thank you to
other soup poets for your inspiration,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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note don’t know if last four lines make any sense trying to do what i did with oth writes in
this pattern keep to four verse but also subject
THIS IS LIKE A FOLLOW UP TO STARS AND TIME
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2013
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