Southern Style

As a child, I was never bored
I spent hours gawking
going through my mother's
home decorating magazines
seeing things I'd never seen
that we could never afford

So full of spacious Southern homes
described as “gracious”
all wrapped in white porches with
white wicker chairs, clean, pristine
untouched, untainted
by 'common' people
and poverty

When they said “gracious”
they didn't mean
universally welcoming

But there were other issues
featuring “rustic” things
cabins and sheds, antique folk art
and cast iron beds
carefully curated collections
of antiquated stuff...
and these were my favorite fads by far
Yes, I thought- here was something
a style more attainable
for the likes of me

Rough, aged structures with
cracks in the walls
like my great aunt's hundred-year-old
cabin, except
theirs were prettier
than hers, all gussied up-
without the necessary utilities
utensils and ugliness
of everyday life

Theirs were not
actual homes, but mere display cases
for fancy flea-market finds
a backyard curiosity
not an actual place to live- because
Oh no- they would never consider
actually
living there

For there is nothing picturesque
about poverty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/5/2018 6:55:00 AM
I like this poem, Rhonda, and your use of details. I don't think it's depressing to share.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad like it! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 4:13:00 AM
I am still amazed that these magazines feature beautiful rooms that we normal people have never seen in real life. My cousin used to take photos of the perfect turkey for Thanksgiving covers of magazines. The PERFECT turkey is not baked at all. It is a RAW turkey that they paint! Your poem made me think of how fooled we are by these magazines. Life is not magazine-perfect for sure, and can you imagine taking a bite of the perfect turkey now?
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 1:09:00 PM
YUCK!! ;p I know what you mean about the cooking magazines... Funny, I actually sniped at those in another poem (comparing the magazine's deception to how people disguise racism), and my best friend said I forever ruined fried chicken for her. ;D I guess glossy hype is a pet peeve of mine. (How will I cope in the Instagram age?)
Date: 10/4/2018 6:41:00 PM
Rhona, this shows deeply your thoughts and emotions on the affluent people who have no concept of poverty. I love the manner in which you composed this poem.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/4/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you! I wasn't sure whether it would be too depressing to share... but it's been gnawing away at me to let it out! ;P
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