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As a child, I was never bored I spent hours gawking going through my mother's home decorating magazines seeing things I'd never seen that we could never afford So full of spacious Southern homes described as “gracious” all wrapped in white porches with white wicker chairs, clean, pristine untouched, untainted by 'common' people and poverty When they said “gracious” they didn't mean universally welcoming But there were other issues featuring “rustic” things cabins and sheds, antique folk art and cast iron beds carefully curated collections of antiquated stuff... and these were my favorite fads by far Yes, I thought- here was something a style more attainable for the likes of me Rough, aged structures with cracks in the walls like my great aunt's hundred-year-old cabin, except theirs were prettier than hers, all gussied up- without the necessary utilities utensils and ugliness of everyday life Theirs were not actual homes, but mere display cases for fancy flea-market finds a backyard curiosity not an actual place to live- because Oh no- they would never consider actually living there For there is nothing picturesque about poverty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/5/2018 6:55:00 AM
I like this poem, Rhonda, and your use of details. I don't think it's depressing to share.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad like it! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 4:13:00 AM
I am still amazed that these magazines feature beautiful rooms that we normal people have never seen in real life. My cousin used to take photos of the perfect turkey for Thanksgiving covers of magazines. The PERFECT turkey is not baked at all. It is a RAW turkey that they paint! Your poem made me think of how fooled we are by these magazines. Life is not magazine-perfect for sure, and can you imagine taking a bite of the perfect turkey now?
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 1:09:00 PM
YUCK!! ;p I know what you mean about the cooking magazines... Funny, I actually sniped at those in another poem (comparing the magazine's deception to how people disguise racism), and my best friend said I forever ruined fried chicken for her. ;D I guess glossy hype is a pet peeve of mine. (How will I cope in the Instagram age?)
Date: 10/4/2018 6:41:00 PM
Rhona, this shows deeply your thoughts and emotions on the affluent people who have no concept of poverty. I love the manner in which you composed this poem.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/4/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you! I wasn't sure whether it would be too depressing to share... but it's been gnawing away at me to let it out! ;P

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