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Southern Exposure

A woman’s voice said Look out the window and I saw a ravine with a fresh cover of snow. I thought it was the neighbor but I was alone. A thicket of trees reached for the sun yet I noticed one was fallen its age born in its rings. Two cats lay on my bed as I took in my visions of a pastoral scene. a day in February in the middle of town. In this moment I bore my seasons and winter called for spring yet a patch of a lawn had turned brown. A woman’s voice said Live, live again as I faced another day.

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Date: 2/18/2025 3:55:00 PM
So where did that voice come from? I enjoyed this and especially that you have cats on your bed?
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Date: 2/18/2025 5:12:00 AM
I love the imagery here, Mike! First a woman’s voice, then the two cats on the bed. This poem has a dreamy quality! Fave for me!
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Date: 2/17/2025 12:56:00 AM
These many vignette give a feeling of change. The cats remain unnamed. Question is whose cats are they? There is a lot of intrigue. It is an interesting mystery.
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