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Crossing a swollen river
The current carries the message
Everything is constant
The flow of images
Pulling feelings downstream
I need to construct a bridge
To join the division in land
To connect deep forests
Stones, branches, and debris
Changing the course
Slowing the energy and momentum
Like life's obstacles
We find a way to get around them
Emptying ourselves into a greater source
A pool of wisdom......

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Date: 6/22/2018 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery.
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Date: 6/18/2018 6:24:00 PM
Lots of wisdom in last 4 lines Like life's obstacles We find a way to get around them Emptying ourselves into a greater source A pool of wisdom......congratulations
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Date: 6/18/2018 12:54:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win poem, Jeffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2018 9:48:00 AM
Very nice Jeffrey. I felt like I was right there, in the moment too. Congratulations :)
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Date: 4/10/2018 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful creativity Jeffrey!!! I enjoyed reading.. awesome imagery..
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 4/10/2018 9:30:00 PM
Thank u so much!
Date: 4/10/2018 5:55:00 PM
Hello Jeffery, yes the swollen river does give an image.I love your two last lines. have a nice evening my friend.
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 4/10/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank u I really appreciate it

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