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Sour Grapes

I’m pinched, not sweet, and ferociously piqued!
A stomp of vines, my feet juiced red — and drunk.
Embossed my boss — his painted smile. He freaked.
Impertinence! I’d put up with his junk!

Worked extra hard to please this balding… (squeeze).
The constant drip...the bitter pills...my wrath.
No girl! No life! To serve this jerk...this sleaze!
I’ll pluck this fattened grape. His stink needs bath —

An hour long shower walloping...indeed!
I’m a great guy - no sense of humor mean.
This cream of the crop creep, he has no creed.
I’ll hire this donkey’s toot and shoot the scene.

But cheer this vat, I cure my awful state.
Conceive revenge, sour pittance for my hate.

8/13/2018
Mark Massey’s Sour Grapes Poetry Contest
8th place

*Embossed - hunted like an animal, to exhaustion
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Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Well done, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Line!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Wow Kim, this is incredible! So clever and smart. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:41 PM
So full of fury and sarcasm, Kim! Well done, and congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Cornish Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Very clever art Kim, and a very fun read!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, Craig!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Wow, very marvelous poem. Felt the rage and also, the uniqueness. :) Great job, writing this and thanks for sharing this masterpiece with us -JWE
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much, JW!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:57 PM
You are a wordsmith, Kim, and it is a pleasure to read how well you put it together. It's like a well orchestrated dance. Donkey's toot is great!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Thanks so much! Wordsmithing can be so much fun, my poetry sister!
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Nicely crafted Kim...time for some sour wine lol...love & light...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Thanks, dear friend!
Onat Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Astonishing poem; that bitter, huh?
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Well not me...for the contest :)
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:29 AM
sour words indeed Kim, good luck in the contest, not sure if I can come up with a poem for this contest, maybe in a few days the muse will behave:-( hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Jan! I know...some days are like that!
Ashley Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Kim, your sarcastic and angry sour grapes makes for a most potent wine :) Love your couplet to close this amazing piece.. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thank you, Susan! :)
Gondolf Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Wow, Kim, this is really, really sour...best of luck in the contest. John
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, John! :)
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