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I sit down and write a poem to share. I have friends on Poetry Soup— they’re everywhere. They’re everywhere my friends online who also take the time to write and post. To write and post the insights we share flicker onscreen for the world to see. For the world to see we seek our muse to shape our dreams into stanzas others will see. The stanzas others will see bear witness to storied lives our visions and our strife— I sit down and write. T

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Date: 9/30/2024 10:31:00 AM
Very nice, Mike. Love the lyric flow and repetition in each stanza. Congratulations on your win! Blessings for you and your pen!
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Date: 9/30/2024 7:21:00 AM
Lovely form Mike! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 9/20/2024 9:08:00 PM
I like this correspondence. Poetry Soup is a treasure trove of new ideas and crafts in poetry. Thank you for recognizing this gift.
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Date: 9/17/2024 8:03:00 PM
Yes Mike, we have friends across the globe through poetry soup and what a delightful companionship we share. We write and our stanzas "bear witness to storied lives our visions and our strife—" You are absolutely right. Enjoyed your beautiful poem, dear friend. All the Best.
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Date: 9/17/2024 3:29:00 AM
Hi Mike, I agree with Daniel too - Indeed we should post our comments and I too liked your style of using the last line as the first line of the next verse, much like a refrain. I loved it. Maria
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:47:00 AM
Hello Mike, Yes, we should sit down and read and post our comments for the world is about feedback and encouragement. Well, expressed! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/16/2024 5:45:00 AM
You seem to have adopted a unique style: repeating the last line in the next stanza. You did well.
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