Soup Safari

SOUP SAFARI
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here I am in NYC...packing after a safari –theme night party
with Soup members two nights ago, filled with awed revelry.
shrieks whistling on linked arms during a photo shoot,
as live cheers of Constance and Andrea went “ whoot!”

while Debbie and Michael hosted “Tag, you’re ‘It’ “games
bringing Nikko and Sara to compete in spelling members’ names…
I still remember Robert H. reciting his comic spiels, what a blast!
our jaws locked from clapping at Dr. Ram’s impromptu dance act,

till Kashinath  segued into a sitar  rap in his flashy jungle attire
prompting Linda to donate PM prizes, much to our hearts’ desire.
on our table, an exciting blend of brew amped repartee’s pitches
amused by Brian fleshing parts of short forms without glitches,

enter wacky Sydney applying geographic values to long verse usage  
with footnotes on how worlds expand over time from poetic vantage,
oh, how Gwen sparkled with pleasantries as cups of jokes poured
most memorable of all, the warm  personal shares of soupers' world

that drew us closer as real people with scraps here and there
recalling red-cherry days and funny bloopers’ wear and tear…

and as I leave from 8th street hailing a  taxi to catch a plane,
notes and album tugged this heart, anticipating next gang’s chain.


copyright

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DEDICATED TO P.D: get well soon and take your daily dose your soup!

*notes: with admiration for soup members included herein... all in the
           name of pure fun!



* Gwendolyn Rix, Brian Strand, Sydney Peck, Myself
* For Michael Falotico’s Table for Four/ P.D Soup Contest
* by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations Nette,, well done on your win here..)
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on your win nette. Sounds like a fun time had by all. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in P.D.'s get well soup contest Nette. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations nette, nicely done xx
A   Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 11:21 PM
NETTE., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD
Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:36 AM
You picked a fine group of poets to share your table, Nette. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:41 PM
I love how yours included so many of the PS members, Nette. A well deserved win in the contest. I really enjoyed yours. Congratulations.
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Would have been such fun Nette..congrats to you. BG
Taylor Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great Fourth. luv Ralph
Johnson Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 3:47 PM
congratulations on a great write and your win. Love, Joyce
Susan Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest :)
Minardi Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Wow, seemed like you know all the poet you've mentioned... That's awesome! Congrats! :)
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "A Table of Four" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:34 AM
A delightful gathering this would be!!!! Well done, Nette....hope you all had a wonderful time!!! :)
La France Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations nette on your win in Michaels contest with this brilliant poem. These are people I would like to meet also!
Falotico Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Nette my dear for a great entry and for supporting my contest.... luv Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:02 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, nette and thanks to make me dance
Sweetheart Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Congrats Nette luv on your excellent win in Michael's contest with your fabulous four at table.. wow so wonderful .. great choices my friend..
Long Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:42 AM
great job and congrats on your win love cory
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:36 PM
I love what you had Kashinath doing and how he was dressed. hahaha. what a picture that makes!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:35 PM
This was very clever how you worked so many members into this one, Nette! And gosh, your own table just flew past me. Way to do the contest.I hope it scores high!so what the heck was i doing?, standing there going whoot whoot whoot? hahaha. Too cool. Luv ya, andrea
Goff Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Hi Nette! quite wonderful couplet! delightful flow of repartee! BRAVO!!! oh...thanks for stopping by my work! me & Ma visited our favorite haunts on the north shore of Lake Superior 'bout a month-ago, for a few days.....we grilled steaks on the shore one evening at a spot where her & Pop loved to go....she spooked me a bit when we arrived (but so sweet!) with her exclamation to the forest around us near the shore.....jimbo
Johnson Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:43 AM
sounds like good fun was had by all, great to hear lively write about the party small:)all go, xo, Don
Maverick Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:34 PM
a raging, rolling, and gripping....not to say (livey write) Nette, i sall be looking out for a win 4 u with this piece.!
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