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Sounds of Soul --My Lovely Children

Birds open the dawn with an offbeat show Drop a many colored cherry at my window I pick it up and look at it with a great surprise It is purple, white and blue, -- with vivid eyes I hardly guess it signifies my most precious gift That would give our flat mood quite a high lift Such things happen only once in a blue moon When you see a host of kicks coming too soon At noon is born the pearl of our conjoined dance Fair, dimpled, thick hair, -- we look on in a trance A daughter, la hija, fille, our ‘meye’ in Bengali A sun is smiling seated on the ripe strawberry It brings a beauty tide in the entire household Every inch of hectic hours goes lovelier manifold Baby cot, feeding bottle, medicine, swing, lullaby Toil for bread, -- time flies in the blink of an eye Gradually grows the baby, -- into a brook-like child Nice view of growing girl sometimes a flower wild In the shade of teachers, parents and grand parents Unfolds her study, personality along with merriment Old leaves drop at home, arrives drought and flood Adaptation flows in deep, -- in the maturing blood This is time, life, world and family all on the move Mirth mingling with tears in its every groove The tree is old and laden with many a sound of soul The offspring is now a sunny lady focused on her goal ________________________________________________ February 18, 2016

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Date: 2/27/2016 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! This is excellent. Imagery with nature and a father's love. A 7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2016 1:11:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/27/2016 9:24:00 AM
I know "the tree old and laden" part. Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2016 1:12:00 AM
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Probir on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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Date: 2/28/2016 1:12:00 AM
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:06:00 AM
Probir, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/27/2016 2:34:00 AM
Have been lookin forward to...... Thank you......
Date: 2/26/2016 4:59:00 PM
Your write is so touching most beautiful lovely memories Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Probir!!! Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2016 8:42:00 PM
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:03:00 PM
beautifully written Probir I am loving reading these poems and so lovely to see the father daughter relationship poems:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you that you like the poem
Date: 2/26/2016 2:56:00 PM
I love the style in which you talk about your beautiful daughter. A father's pride and love flowing from your pen. Congratulations on both. Peace my friend:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2016 8:45:00 PM
Peace... Thank you
Date: 2/26/2016 12:21:00 PM
Probir, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for the entry :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/26/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thanks for the kind placement...
Date: 2/20/2016 2:35:00 AM
This was a colorful piece. I like how it seemed to me, as the seasons were changing, your daughter was getting older, with all the complimentary nature imagery. Good writing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2016 4:59:00 AM
Yes, sentiments around diverse associations in the course of the interesting parenting journey and the sense of an overall integrity thereupon inviting the nature imagery as metaphor. Thank you.......

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