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Sounds of Fall

the tiptoeing deer crunching through the fall leaves ...sound like elephants for Andrea's Fall Animal Haiku contest

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Date: 10/10/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this excellent haiku:) Emilia
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this lovely Sounds of Fall poem >> James
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Date: 10/9/2010 12:22:00 AM
Sure do, love this, another wonderful Haiku Congrats on this superb winner. Harry
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:21:00 PM
Super congrats Francine on this elegant poem for Andrea's contest and a big winner for u my friend.. enjoy with luv ..happy weekend...
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:10:00 PM
This one made me smile when I first read it, Francine. So glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:04:00 PM
Francine really enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Got a chuckle...Sara
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:15:00 AM
Oh super smiles as I read your last line, Francine! How unique!! Enjoyed this one-- cool depiction you did here-- Super congrats on your awesome win! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your 3ard place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Francine
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:28:00 AM
I loved the joking aspect of this one and the contrast between deer and elephants A big third place win for a great poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:18:00 AM
Just lovely francine. Many congratulations.
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Date: 9/30/2010 11:05:00 AM
Nice one Francine, deer are so gorgeous >> James
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:17:00 AM
enjoyed this haiku. Harry
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:08:00 PM
I like what you wrote cause i like to deer hunt.. and yes your are very right indeed they can sould like a elephant. ,,, they can sure scare you some times . Good write with just a few words.. I have never tried this style Haiku , I guess i like to talk to much. anyways you do a pretty good job with it ,,
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:25:00 AM
Smiles -- yes, even the gentlest doe makes quite a sound moving through the crisp, crackling autumn leaves, Francine. Excellent entry for Andrea's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:33:00 AM
lol, I love this... best of luck in contest. luv .Michael
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