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Sounds of Darkness

As I roam into a tunnel of ebon night when stars crumble like grated ash, the remnants of a heavy day fills a bleak alley with rubble and debris . Somehow, the howl of life grows eerie, creepy: stray dogs lapping piles of left-over food in a garbage thick with ravaged bones, while breezes laugh at my emptiness mocking time’s losses and farewells...I bleed upon the fangs of anguish defying this phantom within me that lurks, hollers loud as my lungs cry, " Stop", while my knees tumble on rough cement: and an old man strums haunted notes from his stale corner… an overture to a raw, insolent flight.
................. 9/16/2017 Written for Russell Sivey's In The Dark Contest

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on being featured Net. love phyl
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Date: 9/27/2017 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, on your fine placement :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your placement with an excellent poem.
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:29:00 AM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette, wonderful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:15:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on your placement...a well-deserved win nette...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/21/2017 9:43:00 AM
very dark nette. our world in certain ways is destructively dark. you are good poet. please see mine on poetrysoup for daniel schack poems. i'd love feedback. be well. daniel schack. (for my art-googool tumblr.com-adanthemanworld. cool links on my facebook page too. 9
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Date: 9/19/2017 4:07:00 PM
Hi nette; You really personified the dark in an eerie manner. Good Luck!
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Date: 9/17/2017 9:55:00 AM
This is darkness personified. Good luck Nette, hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/16/2017 10:30:00 AM
Great word usage, a dark poem that should do well in the contest...
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Date: 9/15/2017 8:28:00 PM
I loved the imagery hre, I could picture this all in my mind, great poem!
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Date: 9/15/2017 5:26:00 PM
It surely reads like a dark theme--you have described the rubble, debris, and stray dogs well-- to paint a dark picture--well done as always, nette!
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Date: 9/15/2017 5:06:00 PM
Wow nette the imagery is amazing
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