Sounds of a Day - For Contest

Hungry cry of waking baby				
challenging the staccato				
of small arms fire.
School bus honking
over the droning hum
of I-phone ear-buds.
Wood fire banked against
searing desert winds
rattling glassless windows.
Pop tart in microwaves,
nutritional nuance
of the overfed
undernourished.
Dogs barking in the distance,
squeaking well wheels
bare feet padding
to distant comfort.
Beeping, one eyed tyrants,
demanding attention
“whatuwearin’”,
Rooster’s inane need
to alert everyone
“SUN’S UP! – SUN’S UP!”
Children squabbling
over much – or little.
Pots and pans and decisions,
“who likes what” vs
“who needs it more”.
Mother’s spreading love
on fragile hearts,
singing songs
long forgotten
by the fathers.
Prayers said
in the hope
of golden morrows
tears shed
in the depth
of poverty’s sorrows.
The cry of a waking baby,
 the hungry sound of an empty tin,
choking angry words:
“Please sir, could you help, again”.
Sounds of a day
blowing across a hardened consciousness
aching to be heard.

6/18/2016

submitted to – Sounds of the Day – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/21/2016 10:20:00 AM
Wonderful! Thank you, John!
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Date: 6/21/2016 5:30:00 AM
These are deep sounds "aching to be heard":) Great write:) Congratulations on your win, John:)
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:33:00 PM
wowowow. OUTSTANDING work, John. I love how you covered not just the sounds but the feelings behind them. BIG congrats on one of the best in the contest.
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest John
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Date: 6/20/2016 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, I love the way you go on and on.
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:52:00 PM
Everyday sounds we sometimes overlook but make up our beautiful day. Nicely written and congrats on your fine win, John. Sandra
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Date: 6/18/2016 11:06:00 AM
So many sounds with so many connotations!Great write. All the best for the contest. ~karam~
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