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Sounds of Memorabilia

My father and I stood outside the old farmhouse in which I was raised and he still lived. The black sheep had moved back in temporarily until I found a "handyman special "house to work on and live in. It was about nine thirty pm. and really quite peaceful standing out there with him. That felt good because if there ever was anything between him and I , it surely wasn't peace. It was quite dark as only the hairline of the moon's robust face could be seen bobbing in and out of a sea sparkling with star milk; which is what my siblings and I called it from our perch on that mountain in Vermont. That blonde hairline was occasionally being hidden by clipper ship clouds seeming to be sailing back in search of the harbor from whence the moon had shoved off. I could hear the chorus of crickets fading into background noise as the frogs filled the air with the rising stacatto of their incessant peeping. My Father's voice broke the spell while he was taking it all in and said," I wonder where the peepers all went." What?", I asked. "You know , the frogs ..used to be you could hear 'em peeping all over the place at night like this. You just don't hear 'em any more. Wonder what happened to 'em." He was quite surprised when I told him they were still alive and well and just as noisy as usual. That's the first time we realized the "old man" was losing his hearing. Soon afterwards , he got himself a hearing aid and the peepers came back for him. He was glad about that. Those little nature things made him very happy. I enjoyed that about him.

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Date: 7/6/2011 4:29:00 PM
Congrats on this one being featured, Robert. Sometimes just lying back and remembering the little joys can bring a warmth to the soul. Vince
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Robert. We have missed you here. It's moving narratives like this that really touch my heart. I can see, hear and feel all of it in your words...the sadness of your father losing his hearing (restored thanks to the hearing aid), the "chorus of crickets, the beautiful scenes of the sea from your Vermond mountain "perch." Very nice, indeed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:21:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your big win in Laura's contest with this wonderful write... enjoy another great victory dance for your win ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/29/2009 10:09:00 AM
Loved the story.Thanx for sharing.I am going to try to work on another poem.I can usually only do maybe 2 a year,but I did 3 in a week so either my mind or my pen is flowing freely.
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:56:00 PM
Dear Robert, YOU can watch how they became The Great POETS they are I know You will be on this list someday soon and I hope I can say I helped You are a Gifted POET Keep Writing YOUR POETRY FRIEND ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:52:00 PM
Dear Robert,I have alot of things to say About this Masterpiece First, I also live in Vermont Your description of a cresent Moon is Superb, AWESOME I LOVE the sound of Peepers and Finally this can be the form of a Narrative for it tells a story You are learning very quickly about this site and the Family of POETS that write here If You look under Community to the "All time top Contributers" to the far right it tells you when they became Members If YOU read their older POEM , then the New CONT.
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:41:00 PM
By the looks of the brilliant poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Happy Thanksgiving to all that celebrate. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:04:00 PM
This an oddly fascinating piece to me. The last line of the first paragraph is so amazingly dark and true and deep, and is never probed more after that. Other than that startling moment, you tend to hypnotize the reader into the pastoral delight of the sky, crickets, and frogs.
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:04:00 PM
pt2. And the prose structure somehow gives it a refreshing read feel. The fact that the reader, or obvisouly me, anyway, wants so much more, but is also given a great deal in a small space of time, is a really enchanting ingredient in a poem.
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:19:00 AM
This poem is so simple and sweet .. could feel much emotion from your write and the story of u and your Father... so nice to share today... deeply stirring poetry.. thankxxx Robert for your comments and suggestions on my poetry also.. I have entered many contests since writing from childhood and some have paid off very nicely for submissions.. need to be careful when entering online .. copywright laws and all that .. I love the competition spirit.. u need to enter yours too.. luv "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:31:00 AM
Hi Robert. I came back to favorite this one and you. I love the imagery and the sentiments. (I love frogs, too. Among EVERYTHING else in nature.)
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:28:00 AM
Great write with much expressiveness and descriptiveness. Old age brings different disappearances to each person as hearing etc. It is good that he got the hearing aid and that he can use it. Some people when they get one can't really enjoy using it because it is too noisy with a roaring sound. I especially liked the second paragraph. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:57:00 AM
Oh what a touching moment was that and described with such loving detail I really liked it..Robert....It brought back a memory of when my uncle that daily chewed tobacco and then got a new hearing aid... He said to us one day "that's the first time I heard himself spit in years.....True the little thing are what makes live so delightful and good lesson for kids to be more alert of thier parents changing due to age.
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:13:00 AM
This narrative poem is very heart warming. Families are so important to one another. And nature is God's gift to all who have the heart to feel it. I am glad that your dad can hear the "Peepers" once again. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/22/2009 8:24:00 PM
I Always Visit My Visitors (smile) and I'm so glad I did ... This Poem is a Delight ... Your Use of lyrical-vocabulary is entrancing... Enjoyed It ... If You Are New To The Soup ... Welcome To The Table ... Stir In A Little More of this Meat and Potatoes ... Again, this poem is a Delightful Read ... MoonBee
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Date: 11/22/2009 7:31:00 PM
A wonderful story of children realizing that their parents are aging. You told it beautifully, sprinkling in the mention of "star milk" to add the Vermont local color. Very nice indeed, Robert! Love, Carolyn
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