Sound of Despair

The serene breeze carries your voice
And it falls onto a cloud
To soften the morning dew
Bringing life to the sound of despair
The horizon is filled with green grass
So delicate it eases your bloodstream
Giving you a reason to live
Soon that feeling will fade away
Picked up by an approaching storm
And torn apart by negative thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/11/2016 7:21:00 AM
For sure! Though a chore at times, a positive mental attitude is best. Great, thoughtful read. Thank you.
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/11/2016 7:19:00 PM
Hello Joe, great point you have made. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/11/2016 6:41:00 AM
It seems negative thoughts always somehow seem to show up to mess up the day. Nicely expressed.
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/11/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank You for reading Chris.
Date: 10/11/2016 6:05:00 AM
Very nice ... enjoyed reading ...
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/11/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank You Probir
Date: 10/11/2016 2:50:00 AM
Very yin-yang this, is it Taoism? The balance of light and dark. Great words Morgen /|\
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/11/2016 3:02:00 AM
Hi Rick, it kinda steers towards Taoism/peace. Thanks for reading.
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