Sound of Despair

The serene breeze carries your voice
And it falls onto a cloud
To soften the morning dew
Bringing life to the sound of despair
The horizon is filled with green grass
So delicate it eases your bloodstream
Giving you a reason to live
Soon that feeling will fade away
Picked up by an approaching storm
And torn apart by negative thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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DiMino Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 7:21 AM
For sure! Though a chore at times, a positive mental attitude is best. Great, thoughtful read. Thank you.
Farmer Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Hello Joe, great point you have made. Thanks for reading.
Green Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 6:41 AM
It seems negative thoughts always somehow seem to show up to mess up the day. Nicely expressed.
Farmer Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Thank You for reading Chris.
Gupta Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Very nice ... enjoyed reading ...
Farmer Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Thank You Probir
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Very yin-yang this, is it Taoism? The balance of light and dark. Great words Morgen /|\
Farmer Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Hi Rick, it kinda steers towards Taoism/peace. Thanks for reading.
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