Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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March 13, 2024
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 42 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Souls Cry

Essence melancholic bemoans, echoing soul’s doleful cry
When clamors of unrequited love, earnestly amplify,
Bruised yearnings of deep desires, as lovelorn heart sighs,
For the longings of shattered passions, tearing her eyes.

Deep feelings of emptiness, no longer can she bear,
Burning with intensity, as wistful flames of rejection flare,
From the void of emotions, from sinful, loveless affair,
Bawling now in frustration, blaring anguish of despair.

Soul grieves for love elusive, she believed to be true,
The kind that blossoms hearts; and doting minds woo,
Alas! It was a tantalizing allure, irrevocably gone askew,
An illusion, alike gems, refracting from morning dew.

Soul rises from abandonment, escaping abyss of grief,
Deploying enlightenment, vying calm of ethereal relief,
As cohesion and congruity reconnect to angelic bliss,
Releasing negative feelings, rekindling love-vibes amiss.

Spirits reinvigorated emerge from dreaded goodbye
As soul’s insight redirects influence of love drifting awry,
Exiting barren desert, to find oasis on the other side,
Entrusting mystique of love, passions romantic confide.

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Sara Kendrick March 23, 2024 at 9:03 AM Good that the soul has risen from abandonment and spirits reinvigorated in the end. Thanks for sharing this emotive and expressive work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Edward Ibeh March 19, 2024 at 4:43 AM Outstanding penning, Vijay:-) Your poetry leaves me in awe every time. I'm facing this masterpiece. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!

Karen Jones March 19, 2024 at 12:32 AM Congratulations Vijay on winning the contest!

Victor Buhagiar March 18, 2024 at 6:29 AM A brilliant poem You rise from depths to high peaks. Imagery abounds in your delicate poem. Sorry to be a bit late with my comments. I have poor eyesight these days.

Paula Goldsmith March 17, 2024 at 11:31 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I feel  the soul does cry. We may not see it but we can feel it. Have a blessed day.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 16, 2024 at 8:53 AM Vijay, your amazing poem tells an inspiring story of the soul's resurgence, even after heartbreak and despair. Written in your usual, captivating style of beauty and elegance. :)

Mystic Rose Rose March 15, 2024 at 6:19 AM mystique of love, I love that line so subliminal and so hopeful, even in the dessert, things are thriving, of their own accord, thanks for sharing your thoughts and gifted pen today Vijay, have a blessed one :)

Brandy Nicole March 14, 2024 at 7:19 PM Those ' Deep feelings, ' certainly linger. ' Shattered passions, ' and what could have been. Letting go is difficult, but must be done, in order to move on. Your thoughts are tender and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands March 14, 2024 at 12:48 PM This poem reaches the depths of feelings and then turns with strength and uplifting words to hope. Well written Vijay. I love the 4th stanza. Excellent :)

Joseph P. DiMino March 14, 2024 at 8:33 AM "Spirits reinvigorated emerge from dreaded goodbye As soul’s insight redirects influence of love drifting awry," Very positive, and uplifting. Rejected by someone you love, is the sharpest dagger and deepest wound. Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:55 AM Glad you liked the poem, Joe. Always appreciate your thoughtful insights, my friend. Many thanks.

Bill Baker March 13, 2024 at 9:27 PM Good entry for the contest, Vijay, good luck! The lure of physical attraction or just raw lust often ends up in dust. The soul is resilient, but the physical and mental of a person can experience pure anguish after the illusion is dispelled. Excellent rhyming as usual, my friend. Have a great week! Bill Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:54 AM Absolutely on mark with your analysis and insights, my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Bill. Many thanks.

Michael Tor March 13, 2024 at 7:26 PM Only the Word Wizard can express such perfect phrases creating deep and profound emotions in the reader. Going from a depressive state to a hopeful one. How you portray the effects and theme with your creative knowledge as always is to be admired my friend. A favorite for me... Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:52 AM Michael, my friend--it's been a while--so great to see you in this space. Your kindness echoes through your remarks. Much appreciate your insights. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 13, 2024 at 4:02 PM Dear Vijay, Such a striking portrayal of unrequited love and the anguish it brings. Your words echo the heart's lamentations, capturing the raw emotions of shattered dreams and bruised yearnings. Yet amidst the pain, there is a glimmer of resilience and hope as the soul seeks solace and enlightenment. I love that this is a testament to the strength found in vulnerability and the journey towards healing and self-discovery. - Blessings, Daniel Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:49 AM You got that right, Daniel. Glimmer of hope , indeed--your analysis is on mark. Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed feedback. Many thanks.

Duke Beaufort March 13, 2024 at 3:29 PM Vijay, I love this tale of defeat and reinvigoration. You definitely describe a bruised ego so that we can feel how bad the situation is. I believe we've all been there and hated it when that happened. I'm thinking how terrible it is right now for anyone suffering. I am so glad I'm in a good place--lucky not to fee this woe. Hope you are in a good place too...I imagine you are. Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:46 AM Glad to read your kind remarks, Duke. Blessing to you--stay in that good place. I am fine as well. Much appreciate your comments, as always.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2024 at 1:52 PM - Beautiful written, Vijay :) - Always a pleasure to read your poems :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:44 AM You are so very kind, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Silent One March 13, 2024 at 1:10 PM Hi Vijay an excellent take on the contest.. Your poem beautifully captures the transformative power of love's trials, as the soul emerges from the darkness with renewed strength and insight. It is a poignant reminder that even in the face of heartache, there is hope for healing and the rediscovery of love's mystique. Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:43 AM Thank you my friend. Always an honor to read your insights. Much appreciate. Many thanks, SO.

Joseph May March 13, 2024 at 12:22 PM Love gone askew in the desert but renewed in the oasis, Very nicely done Vijay Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:43 AM That is true Joseph. Much appreciate your visit and feedback, as always. Many thanks.

Deb M March 13, 2024 at 11:46 AM Beautiful Vijay just beautiful! Debx Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:41 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Deb. Many thanks.

Ink Empress March 13, 2024 at 10:07 AM What a profound and deeply moving poem this is dear Vijay, firstly i love the rhymes and your creative wordplay throughout and i love the way thoughts and emotions flow in such eloquence. I especially love the lines “ Soul grieves for love elusive, she believed to be true, The kind that blossoms hearts; and doting minds woo,“ that hits so deep on unrequited love and soul searching for one that would resonate. Your last lines are brilliant. Makes it a fave for the way youv woven a poignant poem Vijay Pandit March 14, 2024 at 8:40 AM That is so nice to hear from you, my friend. Your thoughtful remarks are always appreciated, Ink. Honored to receive your accolades and your FAVE. Many thanks for being there.