Soulful Ebony Eyes

So soulful
   Are your ebony eyes, my sweet. 
      Oh, how they penetrate so deep... 
         Into my own, illuminating 
            My heart with gleams of passionate love.

So soulful;
   Your eyes are windows 
      To the whys of you. They reveal 
         Secrets long untold. You light up the world
            When you make them smile! 

So soulful
   Are those glittering bright stars,
      And they shine like a midday sun. 
         Please, don't break my heart in two
            Flooding them with tears.

So soulful
   Are your ebony eyes, my dearest.
      They effortlessly entrap me in wonder.
         Go on, cast your wondrous spell 
            On me, and leave me as seduced...

As King Cobra 
   To a snake charmer 
      I couldn't resist being hypnotized
         By your come-hither gaze
            If I tried.



''S'' Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme chosen: Soulful
Date written: 11/01/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Edward, wonderful hypnotic writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Ibeh Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Thank you very much for my placement and the congratulations, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 12:50 AM
"As King Cobra To a snake charmer" - Great charm of te eyes. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Pandit Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Every stanza filled with heartfelt emotions --much reach in these expressions of love. Win BIG with this gem, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I'm glad you loved this poem. Most obliged.
Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Edward, I believe this is a winner! I felt the depths of your heart shining through soulful eyes. Best wishes in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 2:26 AM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)
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