Soul Stance River - 2

The rivers are racing with a glee of free morning stampede today
carrying the currency of silted centuries and the cool silk of the wind's summer saga,
within my heart I feel the rambunctious rush of wanderlust
this river is tempting us to bleed for treasure, for the culture of eons
as I hear my Co-Captain William Clark hollar to the enlisted men...
Here we go you sons of no remorse,
row 'till you know the love of pain!...
this is where life stops teaching and begins to dare the soul,
as we leave the east for the west the current catches us 
with no care for our course and the history of our hopes hurrying in swift season,
releasing the prayer I wrote on poor man's paper onto the water's skin
it looks as if a "shooting star" is flying straight into the hands of the Almighty,
we all signed it with our own blood, including York, the childhood slave of Clark's,
for some of us the names and rules of Faith vary
but we all know that we won't succeed without Divine guidance
as love can't live devoid of devotion
and children won't laugh denied freedom,

To enter the Missouri's portal we must travel across the Mississippi diagonally
trouble will acquaint well if we get swept past that point, morale could sink,
our keelboat, Destiny, 55 feet long, 8 feet broad is built to battle all obstacles inclement
to slice the water wide and to plunge through dread like a blood spruced spearhead,
she be our vessel to victory, the four canoes are the seahorses of the campaign
and at this treacherous moment they are galloping forward undaunted, guided with expertise,
we are moving as a minute hand of fortune on the clock of mayhem
and the seconds are smiling as glimmers of chance trailing in the mist of ambition,
we are in, thank Deity, we are in,
Colter and Drouillard nearly had their wrists snapped from paddle pressure
while Private Shanon almost got his eye gouged out by an overhanging oak,
for an hour the crew has paddled with diligent rage to hardly gain a mile
up the Missouri's mystery, it's current must be 10 mph against us 
with a stout wind that speaks of wild contempt which fatigues us into awe,
we have our own tricks though, I ordered the men to employ the iron tipped poles
they shall walk the deck of Destiny, six on each side stabbing into the thick waterway, 
blisters will billow on their hands but this be the price for faster progress,

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/16/2016 11:57:00 PM
You're such a tremendous writer, Justin! You invite me into this world, as if I was sitting in the boat along with them, on the edge of this new discovery. Really cool expressions like "the seahorses of our campaign", a fantasy-esque way of describing adventures beyond the horizon. If only history teachers could tell the story with this much intrigue and passion, those poor students wouldn't be nodding off.
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Date: 1/1/2016 6:18:00 PM
WoW! Justin I am amazed by your pen. Thanks for taking me through history with this epic write. It was as though I was on the ship and I could hear Co-Captain William Clark hollar to his enlisted men. Have you written a book? These epic stories should be a book. Oustanding job! -Alexis 7
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Date: 1/2/2016 4:56:00 PM
I am writing only one book Alexis, the story of my life and love, published by Providence, we are living poetry, students and teachers in this world, and we shall give humanity inspiring spirit. Your encouragement to publish is so meaningful to me, and when the time is right it shall be so my dear Poetess. We must live to express our hearts, everything else will become as it must be Alexis...J.A.B.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:28:00 AM
Those blisters that billow on their hands won't stop them to enter the Missouri 's portal...This shows the determination and dedication indeed.. I might have time to read another one before i log off.. Awesome,!
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Date: 12/21/2015 2:58:00 AM
One word encapsulates their awesome achievement, Perseverance. What they accomplished is awe inspiring, and should be taught, comprehensively, in every school until the end of time Charma...J.A.B.
Date: 12/14/2015 2:42:00 AM
What an adventure to embark upon! This saga is refreshing, a very good read...love the how alive the nature is you describe, how human-like and enchanting. Wanderlust drives them on.."but we all know that we won't succeed without Divine guidance as love can't live devoid of devotion and children won't laugh denied freedom" Loving the language... perfect for the time, for the passion and spirit of these men. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/14/2015 3:25:00 AM
I just knew your passion for nature and history would be piqued grandly by this epic Laura. Your enthusiasm is such a hot joy for me, and your attention and sympathy to the craftsmanship is so interesting to me, it makes me proud, and happy to share with you great Poetess...J.A.B.
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