Soul Searching

Do you know what I really love about you 
golden honey flows in each step
having walked in my words 
stepping over clouds 
Even the darkest ones
every inch of my soul opening
 
From this heart deep inside out 
it's pumping only for you 
knowing the deepest part of me is wishing 
away with the fairies 
that I could kiss you 
on those most gracious lips 
Right now it would take ones breath away 
in a silent gasp

The whispering of awe stuck jewel
living with you such a dream 
actually gets this mind all fired up 
deeply in thought 

Has it been you my love 
that I have forever 
dreamed my queen
Thinking about you  
passing you one of the hottest kisses 
With boiling hugs bubbling inside for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 11:56 PM
I agree with Olive. First stanza was truly beautiful... having walked in my words stepping over clouds. You sound like one who likes to encourage and extend your limits :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 1:19 AM
you are so true timothy wish i could lay it all bare the words are so hard to find for something so perfect wonderful comment pal thank you deeply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 8:45 PM
the first line is captivating.. :)!!! how could one not read succeeding lines.. :)!!!!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 8:58 PM
i write how i feel olive dear friend smiling thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you
Devnath  Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 1:08 PM
It's lovely material beauty, my lovely poet friend. An excellent beauty of sentimental trust. Lovely done. Loved always,bl
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 5:37 AM
A beautiful sentiment; lovely poem, indeed.
Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:05 PM
This one would light any ladies flame. "Do you know what I really love about you golden honey flows in each step having walked in my words stepping over clouds Even the darkest ones every inch of my soul opening" Opening stanza is pure gold!
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:43 PM
A lovely "love" poem, well done ~~
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