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Soul Search - Earth

Today, I seek the earth
created solid, oh so sure
each grain linked to birth,
to death, to my clay feet
ferrying everywhere
life's sublime design.
    


Repost. 17/8/2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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R P Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 11:48 PM
Choicelessness and randomness of life, are very fragile too. Wonderful
Neumann Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:51 AM
Wow. That I like. Clay feet and yet feathers of freedom. Many kind wishes, Kai
Marine Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Kai, for your visit and comment! Humans are sublimely "put together.." If only we could value that more, and to respect others too! Kind Regards, AM.
Faulkner Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Great lines, especially 'each grain linked to birth' and 'life's sublime design,' well done!
Marine Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Michelle- I love that you have highlighted what you enjoyed in this poem! ( so sorry to have come back so late to reply.) (((HUGS)))
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August 27, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Enjoyed this piece, Aqua. It's good to feel grounded to something substantial. :) Thank you for your visit to my Be Silent poem. I've been away for a while, but I hope to get back into things soon.
Marine Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Your visit and comment much appreciated, Eileen! (I haven't been posting regularly myself...) Your poetry is hugely appreciated and read by many here- many , including myself, would love to see more of your work...thank you for being passionately true to yourself! (Inspiring!)
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