Soul Fire

Falling from the Autumn Trees Every leaf glowing like fire The last glow before they die Colour burst of Soul. 30.09.2020. Dodoitsu 26 syllables. Written for Constance La France.

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2020 3:29:00 PM

beautiful autumn imagery, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/6/2020 6:20:00 PM

Thank you Jan....much love.

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2020 7:44:00 AM

Carol, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/5/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Constance....much appreciated.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/4/2020 9:08:00 PM

So nicely composed. Congrats to win. Love.

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/4/2020 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Anisha....much love:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2020 11:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/4/2020 11:13:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise.....much love :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2020 9:47:00 AM

Your poem is ablaze with fiery beauty in vivid Fall imagery, Carol. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/30/2020 9:52:00 AM

Thanks a ton Susan....much appreciated.