Soul Fire

Falling from the Autumn Trees
Every leaf glowing like fire
The last glow before they die
Colour burst of Soul.

30.09.2020.
Dodoitsu
26 syllables.
Written for Constance La France.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 3:29 PM
beautiful autumn imagery, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Mitra Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 6:20 PM
Thank you Jan....much love.
La France Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
Mitra Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Thank you Constance....much appreciated.
Dutta Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 9:08 PM
So nicely composed. Congrats to win. Love.
Mitra Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:11 PM
Thanks Anisha....much love:)
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:40 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:13 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise.....much love :)
Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Your poem is ablaze with fiery beauty in vivid Fall imagery, Carol. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Mitra Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Thanks a ton Susan....much appreciated.
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