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June.27, 2023
A Soul is Divine Poetry Contest
Placed fourth
Sponsor- Mohan Chutani

 

Within my weak and frail body God deposited something so precious. Thus, in my body dwells a soul divine. A spark of life that blazes profuse. It's a slice of God, emitting divine radiance. It's the unique essence that sustains. It's the fragrance that disseminates. It's the infinite universe within each one of us. A temporary prisoner in a clay-built abode, Soul will one day seek redemption. Death cannot summon it or subdue it, Nor time defeat or decay it. With death, the soul like a beam shall spring, Into heaven’s immeasurable heights, Into a realm where restorative waters flow, Where grief shall never make its ugly presence. Originally my soul had the sparkle of a diamond. But when I started loving and caring my body more, It lost its pristine lustre; it lost its divine grace. Without love, my soul is starving and dying. Caught in life’s swift current and swirling eddies, I struggle to stay afloat, I am about to drown. Lord, help me pilot my small vessel, Safely through the turbulent currents of life. I now decide to leave my old ways behind, To retrieve the sparkle of my soul divine. Wash it clean of every trace of sin and blemish, Purifying my thoughts, words, and actions, With my body, mind and spirit coming into fusion. May the eternal energy from the divine soul flow, Through every nerve uniting me with the Supreme To experience the perennial illumination within me.

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Date: 7/6/2023 5:35:00 PM
Beautiful. You are loved! "A soul which is pure and beautiful must pray, or else it will lose its beauty; a soul which is striving after this purity must pray, or else it will never attain it; a soul which is newly converted must pray, or else it will fall again; a sinful soul, plunged in sins, must pray so that it might rise again. There is no soul which is not bound to pray, for every single grace comes to the soul through prayer" (Diary of St. Faustina, Divine Mercy in my Soul, paragraph 146)
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Date: 6/30/2023 10:28:00 AM
A tremendous write, Valsa, everyone can benefit from ~ a superb write, depicting the fall and rise through purification of the heart. Absolutely outstanding, God bless, thanks for sharing. Warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/29/2023 3:53:00 PM
Back with big congrats on your win in the contest, Valsa.
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Date: 6/29/2023 9:55:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest win, dear friend Valsa.
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Date: 6/29/2023 6:47:00 AM
The last verse is beautiful, Valsa, may your desrires come true, ny dear friend. Congratulations on your high finish in the contest! This poem deserved it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/29/2023 3:44:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations for your placement in this contest. It is infinite universe in us. Best. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2023 4:14:00 AM
Thanks a lot Mohan for picking up my poem for a high placement. Also for the opportunity given. Have a great weekend.
Date: 6/28/2023 3:35:00 AM
The vivacity of your exquisite verses is truly remarkable. Your poem serves as a profound source of inspiration, captivating the reader's innermost thoughts and evoking a profound sense of introspection. Valsa, your poetic prowess is evident through the intricate subtleties and astute contemplations woven within your words. With eloquence, you illuminate the very essence of the soul, revealing its profound connection to the divine.
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Date: 6/27/2023 10:36:00 PM
Enlightenment is your middle name. Your poems are always graceful and enchanting, dear Valsa.
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Date: 6/27/2023 4:13:00 PM
so beautiful and deep, enjoyed many presences in your words, thanks for the enlightning and bright poem
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
Solemn thoughts that enlighten. The soul dwells in divinity--as you eloquently convey, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
This is beautiful, when this love of God overflows the soul , we no longer are being consumed by the evil around us, but are being transformed of the renewing of the mind, heart and conscience unto what God has prepared for those which seek, beautiful prayer for all , much love and prayers sent your way
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Date: 6/27/2023 10:45:00 AM
Soul may be tarnished but can never be lost. Uplifting poem.
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Date: 6/27/2023 10:27:00 AM
- Many fine-tuned nuances and wise reflections, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 6/27/2023 9:25:00 AM
Dear Valsa, it is so refreshing to read this eloquent and uplifting expression of the soul, especially after reading several other pieces of new poetry that neither moves or expresses very much or quite simply "miss the mark." You, however hit the target of soul searching - "Bullseye." Cheers, Terrell
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