Soul Dancer

Soul Dancer

Yes, you are my soul dancer
My moonlight prancer,
My forever rippling brook,
Whose heart you quietly took!

I feel you in my arms right now
With me..kissing your Greek brow.
Right here on the couch~
And too in love, to slouch.

Let's have our Moussaka for dinner
We don't have to fret about being thinner
For we are both forever young
And for that, there is an eternal song

7/27/2018

The 7/27 one, am removing.to prevent duplicates on the site.

4/2/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Elless Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Wow, Pangie, You have been here a long time. Nice to have you as a friend. Prolific Poet. Have A Great Day.
Romios Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 9:31 AM
RJ~ there are people here, longer than I. In retrospect, I think I was too prolific. Quantity is not quality. Nor will I create poetry forms. I don’t even know meter or feet. Basics of good poetry.writing ….two liners, one liners, is not for me. Though couplets, I find can be beautiful. Listen to you Fav poets on you tube, read your poetry aloud, after you write it, before you post. Poetry is not sentences on paper. Plenty of that here.yikes Huggs, Pangie xo
Fowler Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Yummy and romantic Pangie. I glad you reposted. Sometimes folks don't read older poems. I do. I like to see the before and after, if you will. :)
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 10:45 AM
The earlier one was exactly the same, I just had the food name spelled wong.)) the one comment it had was anything but supportive, so I put it in the circular file….It’s gone. Life is good, no matter, even if it seems, evil prevails. The Lord gets rid of people who harm people… Love you, Pangie xo
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Hello Panagiota, A question: What is a Mousakka? This poem is romantic. Hugs /Darlene\ xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Hello Panagiota, okay thank you. Hugs. xxx /Darlene\
Romios Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Will mail you on the Moussaka! Wish I had some now….delicious. The link I sent came back .. New link tomorrow Huggs, Pangie
Romios Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Hello Darlene, I just sent you a link to explain the delicious Greek food, Moussaka. I also had it spelled incorrectly in the poem. Apologies. Romantic, I hope so.)) mmmm Thank you for visiting today. Love, Panagiota
Eagle Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 2:21 PM
A hot romantic poem for sure. Very well done.
Romios Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 2:24 PM
LOL Elena… It sizzles like hot, Greek cheese! OPA. Huggs, Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 11:58 AM
- A romantic couple who are perfect for each other ... beautiful poem, Pangie :) - hugs
Romios Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Hello…Anna Lise, great poetess. I think you summarize this poem perfectly! So glad you enjoyed it and even gladder to see you today! I hope your week ahead is fulfilling and happy l Love, Pangie xo
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