Soul Conversion

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Written on June 5, 2025

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We’ve changed, so much have we lost that soft touch? when the wind blows through the leaves do we hear the music, as she grieves? We’ve changed, it happened when? I’m not sure, but if feels like sin when the music of God’s grace listens to the voices – the human race. We’ve changed, lost our gift for giving is this the answer? Have we stopped living? Did it happen when cell phones awoke a feeling inside – like another world spoke? We’ve changed, but it isn’t the end we can return to being a true friend give from our heart, our light and love with kindness stirred by God above! We’ve changed and I believe we all know it if we will simply look inside ourself and admit when all is said and done, we’ve lost our concern will we let go of our pride and finally learn? When it comes down to it, we only need one thing the love and hope and faith inspired by our King the peace that comes to us, because He gave it all His life a sacrifice, guiding us so we’ll never fall We’ve changed quite a bit, but the truth shall tell He saved us from the darkest place called hell He saved us from these fears and tears, all the worst Reassuring our souls that our lives He reversed. We’ve changed and sometimes I know it seems strange to let God take control, our lives, our hearts, to rearrange but I know, when He takes control – love has its way and all I need to do is open my heart and pray… wherever I’m weak, He’ll be my strength and I know He will go to the greatest length to give me a second chance to live altruistically life with Jesus is a life lived optimistically with hope, I offer Him my life with faith, I believe in His sacrifice with love, the way looks so bright with Him, I know it’s going to be alright!

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/6/2025 8:07:00 PM

These lines say it all ~ “We’ve changed and sometimes I know it seems strange to let God take control, our lives, our hearts, to rearrange but I know, when He takes control – love has its way and all I need to do is open my heart and pray…”