Soul and Memory

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Your memories perplex a confused mind. A vast sea-like water spout erupts behind. I morphed into what you were enduring. We are once again being left in the wind. Scars were tickled with scent of spring. Tulip gardens and vivid hues are enchanting. Hypnotic mind's remoteness is strange. Using the ninth divine cloud, you lauding. Dismal views would drive me strange. I'd sing for the spirits of the carnage. In my mind, the calm of today is gone. Darken spots provide a unique phage. Feeling in the heart as cold as scorn. So, where is this mind going torn? This is the mind's intrinsic norm. Wherever darkness rules are born. You can't discern truth from deform. Yet, reality is a colorless transform. Trust has been ripped and struck. The only thing left is a bodily storm. Sadness is the hallmark of the muck. Left you with no clear plan of attack. It's the saddest situation conceivable. It is the master interface for all ruck.
Written: October 04, 2021

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Date: 10/6/2021 5:57:00 AM
Melancholy write, distorted truth will sour reality...Delice
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Date: 10/5/2021 4:37:00 PM
I see here one lonely and confused. Asking why and how this has become his estate when in an effort to aide a friend in need he was pulled down into an abyss. Nicely done my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/5/2021 7:53:00 AM
Rhythmic inspiring stanzas that express powerful emotions and truths, dearest Lasaad! Well done!
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Date: 10/5/2021 6:22:00 AM
Bid sad and melancholy but true emotions--well done, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/5/2021 4:43:00 AM
I like these stanzas. Very good rhyming you have done in them. The photo chosen reveals a very lovely beach somewhere. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:20:00 AM
Like this: You can't discern truth from deform. Yet, reality is a colorless transform.
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Date: 10/5/2021 1:09:00 AM
I used to be such fun. Now it's such sadness. I relate to your poem, so well done.
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Date: 10/4/2021 9:32:00 PM
A wonderful poem in Rubaiyat form Lasaad. Memory is a marvellous thing, brings back lovely times one has had, though sometimes our memories are hurtful or sad… Belle
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