Sorrow's Fulfillment

Sorrow is the looming sadness
brought forth by the past
through a hole in the sky.
An image within an image.
A scene of a winter window
a young girl with pigtails peers
out of at nothing in particular
but the last hanging ice-sculpture
bowing the gutter above her.
Her eyes are glassy like that
lone remaining vestige of holiday 
warmth and heavy like the gravity
wishing away all the promises made
to visit again and keep in touch;
the last gift to unwrap that 
her mischievous orange-headed
cousin rips from her hands
and hides away to be discovered
some years later beneath the 
stairwell under a calico-checkered
wool blanket, frayed, the day of her
mother’s funeral, with no 
accompanying apologies made 
as her soft hazel eyes slowly 
fasten a river flush with sadness 
for her young adult form, slender
and beautiful, to swim through 
next summers and all the way 
back to the house that stole her
mother beaten to death by the 
cancerous sun, so she can 
watch once more the icicles gather; 
watch as they droop into puddles of 
sorrow’s fulfilment drip upon drip.
A murky pond into which an orphan dives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/4/2019 3:02:00 PM
Hello Phillip Garcia, this is so sad to read. i had teary eyes. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/3/2019 5:13:00 AM
Wow, Phillip.Drop the mike! and Light the piano on fire on your way out. You have written a poem that stirs up my soul! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! I cannot stop saying this. Wow!
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