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Sorrows

Once, on a street full of grey, there she sits, a head of sorrow. With nowhere to go, nowhere to stay, there her hair blows. Wandering the streets, watching the lights come to life, there under the bridge, she spends her night out. With a night to herself, pondering over thoughts, there under the stars, she swore to be the light. Once, in a house full of red, there she stands, a body of pain. With nowhere to go, nowhere to stay, there her tears flow. Looking at her house, watching the lights fade and die, there under the bed, she cried her eyes out. With a house to herself, packing her bags, there under the stars, she swore to never love. Once, on a bridge full of black, there she stares, a weary mind. With nowhere to go, nowhere to stay, there her thoughts die. Staring at the sea, watching the waves come and go, there under the night, she wanted to jump. With a bridge to herself, her body numb, there under the stars, she swore to jump. Thrice, her swears were never made. She swore to be the light, but she couldn't. She swore to never love, but she couldn't. She swore to jump, but how could she? And with a life full of grey, red and black, there under the stars, she finally saw white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 7:28:00 AM
Priscilla L...Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/12/2016 10:17:00 AM
Hi! Thank you so much for your word, it really makes my day! Actually, this is my first poem I wrote, and I was wondering if my poem would outstand enough to attract someone's reading interest, thank you for commenting! (It gives me a feeling that my poem actually exists, if you know what I mean) Since I've only started high school, I do not build my hopes too high on my poetic skills (I only started a few days ago!) and I really do hope you enjoy my poem. I will stop by and read your poems whenever I have free time and I hope it helps me in building my skills too! Thanks, have a nice day! :-)

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