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Sorrow

A hurt heart to your death, I must get through the pain. Just one breath, I take in vain. You are gone and never to be found. Living the restless life, Without you I've drown. Now I am at strife. I feel pain, distress. Sorrow fills the eyes, Watching you go in the ground in great dress. I don't know how to deal when someone dies. 2/24/2017

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/30/2017 10:53:00 AM

...back to re-read Alex :-) see if you have anything new. Andrea Dietrich, one of the best writers here, and nicest has a great poem called 'Three Doors'. It may give you some inspiration. She wrote it for a Doors contest. All the entries I have read are really good, you will like them. The contest is sponsored by Richard Lamoureux who is a fantastic writer and person, very encouraging. When you read and comment, they are very supportive. Both have great writers block poems too. happy writing :-)

Alexandria Grace
Date: 3/31/2017 8:49:00 AM

I will check out this poem thank you! Also, I will see if I can figure that out lol! :) thank you again!

Lynn Marie
Date: 3/30/2017 11:01:00 AM

...if you turn On your Soupmail in the member area Profiles, I can send these messages there instead of hijacking your poem pages..lol Other poets will send you mail too, there is not enough space here..lol have a happy day Alex :-)

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/25/2017 12:32:00 AM

There is a lot of emotion in your poem, I could feel that gulping sensation of trying to 'catch a breath' through your very sad words. Excellent writing, so sad, penned with heart :-) blessings, lynn

Alexandria Grace
Date: 2/27/2017 10:17:00 AM

Oh my goodness! Thank you once again! :)