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Soothing Behemoths

I am the evil beneath you, i am the good above you The smoke you inhale and the alcohol you drink For all i know my mental is a converging comet and the sloths blazing on themountain signify a vision of the nothing. I am the mirror of your reflection, without me you know not yourself but emptiness I am the bed you rest on, without me you know not comfort The food you devour The women you fornicate for am the demon to your fate the cancer to your brain and the aids to your blood Infect your mind with sin and lay rest in oblique Demented of your own drugs...sit in distress with the lavish shirt of aloha i know, i know i will always know The secret to your own death For i am what you fear the most... Yourself.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/21/2025 4:18:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 8:30:00 PM

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Andrea Edwards

Date: 3/31/2016 8:18:00 PM

Hey Robert Mraba! I think you do a good job keeping the flow going in this poem. I like the tone and voice you have in it. You do have a couple potential typos near the top though. Here's what I've found: "I know my mental [what] is a..." I feel like you're missing a noun there. Also, "themountain" is probably missing a space. Keep it up!