Soon Parted

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11th March 2025

Written as a reply, got no response so deleted and posted it here.

When Sonnet and Limerick parted Sonnet became most brokenhearted Limerick though blue Met up with Haiku It was over soon as it started.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2025 2:50:00 PM

I really like this one. Great love affairs can start in poetry just anywhere else. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/6/2025 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I guess there are poets who’ve fallen in love with one another, sharing poetry o’er the breeze, golden opportunities seized… Beryl

Robert Gorelick

Date: 3/17/2025 12:32:00 PM

Eternal triangle's poetic passion__The theme shall never go out of fashion__Where's the rhyme, what's the reason?__Such betrayal, 'tis treason!__Fools for love never walk, they rush in

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/17/2025 3:36:00 PM

Thank you Robert, love your response Limerick….. Only fools rush in where wise folk would not - With their head over heels they tie the knot - For moments of pleasure - They are tied forever - All because the lovers became besot.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 3/17/2025 12:33:00 PM

A charming poetic ditty, Beryl.